What's your worst nightmare? by fugitive

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What's your worst nightmare?

Postby fugitive » Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:24 pm

Eek! Boring story, if you want to skip it's fine with me!

The sky was pitch black, no moon shone, no stars twinkled. One man sat alone in the dark, his face twisted with fear, then it came, the howling. A dark dog like creature walked slowly towards the man, who upon seeing the beast froze. "L-leave me alone y-you monster." The man hardly could make the words leave his lips, the monster came closer, letting out a deep, evil chuckle.

Max let out a scream as he awoke and throw off his covers. The seventeen year old boy had this dream almost every night, it scared him. Not that he told anyone, no, he didn't want to be the laughing stock of his school now, did he? Sighing, Max got out of bed and went to get really for his day, like he always did. Soon he walked down stairs where his mom was waiting for him. "Max, are you sure you're alright? I heard you wimping and screaming again." The teen let out a groan, "I'm fine, mom." He said before sitting down to wait for his breakfast. "Then why, Max, are you up five in the morning?" She asked. Max looked at the clock then back at his mother who was still wearing her PJs, the boy thought fast, "Oh, didn't I tell you? There is a surprise at my school. We have to be they by five thirty." He fibbed. His mom stared at him, "Really? On a Saturday?" His mother raised a eyebrow. "Ahh, yeah, of course, They don't do fun things on a school day." He explained, his mother still didn't quite believe him but just then the phone rang, it was now his mother's turn to groan, "Now, who could that be five in the morning?" She muttered walking to the next room. Max walk slowly out the front door and down the street, his mom was always trying to find out what he was hiding, always. Max walked into his favorite alleyway, it was dark and chilly this morning, not the best place to be, but nevertheless he was there.


Oh forget it! I was trying to write the story of what and how this happened to him but I'm a boring writer. xD
Well, anyway, he gets kidnapped while he's in the alleyway, is tested on and is turned into the monster from his dreams, which is what the picture is of.

I believe I'm the first to think of using two of the doggies to make a four eyed one. I'm so happy how he turned out! I started him quite a while ago, but I'm lazy so he didn't get completed till now.

How to you like the story? Or did it bore you so bad you couldn't finish?
Do you like the design? Shading?

Answer the questions! You'll get a cookie. xD
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Re: What's your worst nightmare?

Postby broker » Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:34 pm

"I'm fine, mom." He said before sitting down to wait for his breakfast. "Then why, Max, are you up five in the morning?" She asked. Max looked at the clock then back at his mother who was still wearing her PJs, the boy thought fast, "Oh, didn't I tell you? There is a surprise at my school. We have to be they by five thirty." He fibbed. His mom stared at him, "Really? On a Saturday?" His mother raised a eyebrow. "Ahh, yeah, of course, They don't do fun things on a school day."

I. Crackle. Up. 8D
I loved the story! {Continue?}
I wasn't bored.
Yes, I like the design and shading. :}
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Now, wheres my cookie?
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Re: What's your worst nightmare?

Postby wolves+horses » Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:54 pm

COOKIE?? OK!!!! I didn't really notice any shading truthfully, but the actual design is very interesting and original! Pretty cool and creepy at the same time! ;) About the story, I was just starting to get into it! Did you have to stop? And the next part sounded like it would've sounded really cool! :cry: Oh well, I guess your the author... :roll:
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Re: What's your worst nightmare?

Postby fugitive » Sun Jun 05, 2011 1:19 pm

@Veri: Hmmm.... Really.. OK, fine. -hands a cookie over- I'm happy you enjoyed it. ^^

@Dracorn: Heh, yeah, I'm not the best at shading, I'm hoping to improve though. And the story, I'm thinking about turning it into a little chapter thing on this site. Want me to pm you if I do? Oh, almost forgot, -hand a cookie over- Don't eat it to fast and if you start feeling funny you might have to spit it out. xD

Seem goes for you Veri! About the cookie I mean. <<
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