Fire and Water will never mix. by IgnoreThisAccount

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Fire and Water will never mix.

Postby IgnoreThisAccount » Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:43 pm

Fire and Water will never mix, by BlueWolfEyes.

Fire and water first met at a windy beach inbetween land and sky.
It was a breezy day, calm and peaceful. The birds tweeted happily as the leaves of the trees floated in the air.
A young man arrived, wanting to catch a fish in the cold waters of that day.
He lit a fire with a few sticks and put a pan over it-At that moment Fire felt great, at the center of attention and very useful.
But then the fisherman caught a rainbow carp. Being very rare, now Water felt useful and helpful. Helping others was just a hobby of Water's.
The young man put the carp over the fire.
Then Water and Fire started yelling at each other:
"I'm making your carp cook! I am helping the fisherman EAT! I am more important!"
"Well, if my carp wasn't there, you wouldn't have anything to cook! So I am more important!"
Then Water and fire materialized. Fire attacked Water which started the whole fight.
As the fisherman ran away, Fire and water kept fighting. Nothing would stop them.
And even now, Water and Fire are still fighting inbetween the sky and the earth....

By me.
Anyone like the story?
Last edited by IgnoreThisAccount on Wed Apr 27, 2011 8:42 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Fire and Water will never mix.

Postby IgnoreThisAccount » Wed Apr 27, 2011 8:09 am

I'd like crticism on the story please :)
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Re: Fire and Water will never mix.

Postby {ℓєσραя∂} » Wed Apr 27, 2011 8:30 am

This is good! Very cute! lol I do like thought..

And not being rude, but Catched should be caught.. Sorry if I offend..

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Re: Fire and Water will never mix.

Postby IgnoreThisAccount » Wed Apr 27, 2011 8:41 am

The Wolf wrote:This is good! Very cute! lol I do like thought..

And not being rude, but Catched should be caught.. Sorry if I offend..

No, you are not offending me, I normally am great at spelling but while writing poems, I am really bad at spelling.
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Re: Fire and Water will never mix.

Postby {ℓєσραя∂} » Wed Apr 27, 2011 8:46 am

I'm always bad at spelling. Unless reading. If I am writing and read back over it there will be 10 million mistakes. Lol Drives me insane!

Still love the drawing. Water's side is my favorite.

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