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Any and All critique is highly appreciated :D

[P0CKETKNIFE]

I didn't realize you had gotten to my design until now; sorry for the delayed response!! This is a lovely horse, thank you for making them for me <33

The color swatches you chose are perfect for the coat color, though with dun horses there can be more variation in shades!! This isn't a critique as much as it is a tip to experiment with in the future. Also worth noting is the characteristic striping pattern on dun horses. You'll see this on the knee area, and the prominent stripe down the back to the tail. It's also more common for dun horses to have the pangare gene which lightens hair around the muzzle and on their stomach. Looking at a variety of references will help you see these kinds of traits!!