[~Macmanus~]

I'm not good at writing in Oekaki, so the notes are as listed below:

1- Lower the head a little, the forehead is not as high as it looks, especially with that much hair covering it.

2- More rounded eyes. Irises go a long way in putting emotions in the eyes.

3- Round the chin a bit and distinguish it from the neck. In real drawings, the neck is a little thicker, but the thinner neck I did is common for more cartoony looks

4- Separate the skin from the edges of the clothing, unless the clothing is skintight.

5- Collar bones make the chest look a little better when applicable. Also, the tip mentioned in #4

6- Elbow comes a little farther down. In real life, the elbow is aligned with the navel.

7- Softer, more natural creases on the loose clothing.

[Bloodhundur]

Aha, thank you for doing this~
I can least now know what I am doing a bit wrong.
I'll take the notes in mind. Thank you again

[~Macmanus~]

Glad I could help :)