Oblivion Wing wrote:Bump.
This one doesn't have a posted end date, I can only assume that it might end around the same time as their cousin's adoption ends.
But there is, possibly, still some time to try out.
Alaric Glöckner wrote:Well, it's quite obvious who gets this pups, I think.
Oblivion Wing, Nerthus is yours!
I believe the effort was obvious here, and the personality was pretty clear as well (maybe you can say you beat the dead horse with it; lol jk jk)
Honestly, I loved how well the character was developed with everything you had. She sort of reminded me of a type of character I would create myself, which is definitely a complex one... Before I ramble, I want to get right to specifics.
The only thing I didn't agree with 100% was the way old Siggy sounded pretty sexist in the story. Honestly, I just thought having 2 male heirs would be nice to pass the legacy down, like how Cad and Sig were brothers (If Mort argued it, I would have allowed her to make her heir female; it wasn't heavily discussed).
However!!
Don't take that to heart. I think with this new idea, I may even be able to keep it official in the pack's plot. Perhaps I could even write Sigurd's side of the story after reading what you put down. Something like... Sigurd wanted male heirs to protect the female pups, as his sister did die as a pup. He doesn't like seeing females fight solely because his sister died at the claws of a beat. Nerthus wouldn't know that, but I feel it could totally fit with what you have.
This is just me trying to put pieces together XD I loved your form, your art, the personality and the opportunities you presented within your story. Now, I'm tired and will flesh out the official stuff on a later date.
Enjoy Nerthus <3
Alaric Glöckner wrote:Well, it's quite obvious who gets this pups, I think.
Oblivion Wing, Nerthus is yours!
I believe the effort was obvious here, and the personality was pretty clear as well (maybe you can say you beat the dead horse with it; lol jk jk)
Honestly, I loved how well the character was developed with everything you had. She sort of reminded me of a type of character I would create myself, which is definitely a complex one... Before I ramble, I want to get right to specifics.
The only thing I didn't agree with 100% was the way old Siggy sounded pretty sexist in the story. Honestly, I just thought having 2 male heirs would be nice to pass the legacy down, like how Cad and Sig were brothers (If Mort argued it, I would have allowed her to make her heir female; it wasn't heavily discussed).
However!!
Don't take that to heart. I think with this new idea, I may even be able to keep it official in the pack's plot. Perhaps I could even write Sigurd's side of the story after reading what you put down. Something like... Sigurd wanted male heirs to protect the female pups, as his sister did die as a pup. He doesn't like seeing females fight solely because his sister died at the claws of a beat. Nerthus wouldn't know that, but I feel it could totally fit with what you have.
This is just me trying to put pieces together XD I loved your form, your art, the personality and the opportunities you presented within your story. Now, I'm tired and will flesh out the official stuff on a later date.
Enjoy Nerthus <3
Users browsing this forum: EsMentiras, Kitsyn, mincedmeat and 1 guest