[MistCat]

just a quick doodle, i didn't put too much detail in it. sorry.
hope it helps.
i hope you don't mind but i went with kinda a chibi style for my redline..
may i offer some constructive criticism?

BLACK LINES WHERE NOT DRAWN BY ME, THEY BELONG TO LILLYBEAR.

[Lillybear]

Super cute! Thanks for redlining.

Sure, I'm up for some criticism.

[MistCat]

Super cute! Thanks for redlining.

Sure, I'm up for some criticism.

You're welcome

what i like about you're drawing is how cut it looks, the large eyes, fluffy tail and big paws are adorable.
my tips and constructive criticism: you don't usually see the whites of an animal's eye unless they are looking very far to the right or left. (however, it is a style that people use) (tip: some artiest use showing whites of the eye to make the animal seem scared.) the paws could use a few lines to show the animal's toes. for my last bit of advice, don't use to much smoothing, it looks a tad unnatural if you use to much, a wild animal's fur is usually a bit uneven and messy. i hope it helps. ^^

[Lillybear]

Super cute! Thanks for redlining.

Sure, I'm up for some criticism.

You're welcome

what i like about you're drawing is how cut it looks, the large eyes, fluffy tail and big paws are adorable.
my tips and constructive criticism: you don't usually see the whites of an animal's eye unless they are looking very far to the right or left. (however, it is a style that people use) (tip: some artiest use showing whites of the eye to make the animal seem scared.) the paws could use a few lines to show the animal's toes. for my last bit of advice, don't use to much smoothing, it looks a tad unnatural if you use to much, a wild animal's fur is usually a bit uneven and messy. i hope it helps. ^^

Thank for all of the advice. C:

Do you think you could add me so I could touch up your lines a bit?

Only if this is okay with you. c:

[MistCat]

Super cute! Thanks for redlining.

Sure, I'm up for some criticism.

You're welcome

what i like about you're drawing is how cut it looks, the large eyes, fluffy tail and big paws are adorable.
my tips and constructive criticism: you don't usually see the whites of an animal's eye unless they are looking very far to the right or left. (however, it is a style that people use) (tip: some artiest use showing whites of the eye to make the animal seem scared.) the paws could use a few lines to show the animal's toes. for my last bit of advice, don't use to much smoothing, it looks a tad unnatural if you use to much, a wild animal's fur is usually a bit uneven and messy. i hope it helps. ^^

Thank for all of the advice. C:

Do you think you could add me so I could touch up your lines a bit?

Only if this is okay with you. c:

sure thing

[Lillybear]

sure thing

Thanks again!