Chaos And Talon ((13th Story)) by Suki~

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Chaos And Talon ((13th Story))

Postby Suki~ » Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:45 am

Talon smiled and opened one eye as Chaos slept, He got up and tugged on Chaos's ear, Chaos groaned, "What/" She yawned, Talon smiled, "You coming?" He asked, "Where?" Chaos asked. Talon grinned, "Just come!" He laughed, Both of them started walking down the stream, They kept seeing a flash of red and blue running past them, They stopped when they saw a wolf laying on a rock, "So, What brings you here love birds?" Chaos coughed, "L- ove birds? No no no, You got it all wrong, We are just friends," She saiid, Talon frowned slightly, "Yeah, Just friends." He admitted. "Ah," Said the red and blue wolf, "I see, Your to shy to admitt that you, You both are in love. Chaos shook her head, "No!" She growled, "We are just friends!" She growled. Talon sighed, "Wait!" He gasped, "Well, Chaos. I wish we weren't just friends. I wish we were mates, Have a family. But you don't love me. And i want you to. My life will fade without you." He sad sadly. Chaos's eyes grew wide, She didn't know what to say, "I- I-"
"Say no more." The red and blue wolf growled. Talon ran back to the den with Chaos.


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Re: Chaos And Talon ((13th Story))

Postby Sabatea » Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:55 am

I like it :) But for the future characters could they be more realistically-colored? :) I don't mind if theres a black and white or brown and white just so long as their natural colors, is that okay? :) Unless its one of the charries like Victoria or this one, their fine ^-^
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Re: Chaos And Talon ((13th Story))

Postby Suki~ » Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:02 am

Sabatea wrote:I like it :) But for the future characters could they be more realistically-colored? :) I don't mind if theres a black and white or brown and white just so long as their natural colors, is that okay? :) Unless its one of the charries like Victoria or this one, their fine ^-^


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Re: Chaos And Talon ((13th Story))

Postby Sabatea » Sun Sep 19, 2010 7:04 am

:) Could you also add the previous? :)
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