Chaos and Talon ((11th story)) by Suki~

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Chaos and Talon ((11th story))

Postby Suki~ » Fri Sep 17, 2010 10:38 am

Talon smiled, Chaos crawled into the den, Talon felt a chill, And herd the wind whispering "Follow Me, You will find something new, And you will find the love you your life, Loves you back." Talon nodded and ran into the den He grabbed Chaos and tugged her out of the den, "Whoa! Whoa! Wait!" She laughed, "Where are we going?" She asked licking the dirt off her shoulder, "Somwhere!" He growled, Chaos nodded and smiled, Talon leaed the way with Chaos not to far behind, The finally got to the tallest tree in the forest, Talon howled, His howl echoed through thenforesy, Moments later he herd another howl, He followed the sound, Chaos followed his, She yawned, "Ta-" She was interupped by Talon "VICTORIA!!" he yelled with happiness, "Victoria?" Chaos repeated, "Victoria.." She said again, She shook her head and sniffed the ground, Talon ran toward a yellow wolf, Chaos ran behind him, Talon licked the wolf right on her lip and rubbed his head against her's, The yellow she-wolf was named Victoria, Victoria growled and pushed Talon back, "Who is it!?" She growled, Thhe she-wolf was also blind, Talon laughed, "Talob!"He said, Chaos sighed watching the two chat with each other, "Talon," She interuppted, Talon shook his head, "What?!" He said, "Should i just go back to the den?" She asked, Talon shook his head, "
Oh, Who is this?" Victoria asked, Talon smiled, "This is Chaos," He got closer to Victoria and whispered in her ear, "She is the one who made my heart skip beats, I love her." Victoria smiled "Nice to meet you, Chaos." She smiled. Chaos smiled, "Well good night," Talon said good-bye top Victoria and they both went back to the den to sleep.


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Re: Chaos and Talon ((11th story))

Postby Sabatea » Fri Sep 17, 2010 10:50 am

I like it I just have one problem... Why is she yellow? O_o Lol Its fine if shes a yellow-ish brown but I would perfer a more real-looking wolf ^-^
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