[Suki~]

5th story of Chaos and Talon.... Here ya go!

Talon woke up to the sound of a chirping bird, He yawned and found Chaos sitting outside the den, Her eyes were closed and a tear slowly fell from her eye, Talon sniffed the air, "I'll just let her be." She whispered, He fell asleep again and woke up in a world of blood He saw with bood all over his paws, And scars all over his body, A bow-and-arrow shot throught part of his neck, He gasped for air and collapsed to the ground, He woke up right away, "CHAOS!" he yelled, Chaos jumped right up and looked at Talon, "What?!" She asked, She crawled inside the den with him and looked at him, Talon just closed his eyes and Chaos sighed

Hope you liked it! Thnx!

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[Sabatea]

I like it but something is that she just met Talon in the third story. Perhaps she could look at him instead of nuzzling?

[Suki~]

Okay, i will edit.

[Sabatea]

Okay. I like it! Uhm, could you add the links for the last episode and add that this is the fifth to the title and then its perfect! ^-^

[Suki~]

Okay! i'll add them!

[Sabatea]

You did really good on this

[Suki~]

Why, Thank you! I hope i did the links right.... If not, Please tell me.

[Sabatea]

It would be fine if you just did the previous

[Suki~]

Okay, so, Did you want to do the next story? Or do you want me to do it?

[Sabatea]

You choose, I don't mind ^-^