second: I redlined everything because i think it looks better than having some lines ed and the others grey
AND explanation:
Everything i changed is my opinion and i'm not a professional or something like that and i'm still learning (also in editing redlines)
1. I changed the ears - i think the one in the front should not end with the head but a little under it; The one in the back should be as high as the other one (when i think of it then there shouldn't be any reason why the one behind is smaller)
2. I changed the eyebrow circle to a wolfish one but can also be your circle if you want ^^ i just tried something
3. I made the eye smaller and more wolfish because i don't need in which direction you wanted it to be more realistic... deer, wolf, bear,... but your's also great ^^
4. i think the cheek fluff should be below the ears
5. I made the neck a little bit more fluffy but that also depends on the style
6. What i really would do is give it shoulderplate (i think i accidentaly changed the perspective of it with that shoulderplate *scratching on head*) with it you see the "rounding" of the belly
7. I give it some kind of chest muscles/ breast thing but that's because of the ruined perspective XD
8. i made the feet a little bit thicker and added paws (I'm totally bad at drawing paws so please ignore them
and the left front leg isn't right)9. The tail is great and also what's left
I read you wanted it thinner and cuter but i made it thicker and more serious but maybe you or others can use some of those redlined/ described things
And sorry for the unclear lines... i had to do them with a bigger size...
If you want something more 'plumerian' style then maybe you should get a look at them for refereces or anything else :3
