Redlined by SchnaDin

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Redlined

Postby SchnaDin » Sun Feb 22, 2015 11:27 am

So! Because no one redline this i tried to resdline some things.
I'm not a professional and these are really just suggestions :)
I will add you to the drawing so you can see better what i would change and made a second one because of the size of the head
Suggestions for changing:
- I would make the neck and chest more fluffy or wider
- I think the head is too big for the body
- the knee needs to be a little bit higher i think
- i would draw the ear a little bit belox the hair

Drawing below (i don't know in which direction she looks so i assumed she looks slightly in my direction) If yes then:
- I would add the second ear because the other one is also very high and i think the other would be also visible
- If she looks slighty in my direction i would add another eye ^^ If she looks to the right then i would change the nose more to the
right
- and i would make the neck a litte bit wider/more fluffy

The second drawing i've done you can see how i would have draw her i think? But she doesn't look like a fox/cat thing anymore... more like a wolf or dog -.-

But as i said: Just suggestions and nothing you have to do :3 maybe others will also redline this after i posted mine ^^ (that happend on another redline thing - posted it and 2 other came)
If you have any questions left feel free to pm me!
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Re: Redlined

Postby joji » Thu Feb 26, 2015 7:37 am

thank you for the tips and redline c:
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