Redlined c: by tokariya

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Redlined c:

Postby tokariya » Sat Apr 26, 2014 11:32 am

told you im not that good ;u;
okay but here some tips ^^

1.make the snout a bit more curved
2.make the horn a bit shorter and straighter
3.use the smoothing tool, it makes the lines less bumpy
4.make ears a bit smaller and close to the size of the eye
5.im bad at wings, but the wings dont connect to the body like that
6.where the body cuts off the page, make it curve a bit, or it looks like the chest never ends
7.make the neck a bit thicker
8.make the mouth a teensy bit higher and shorter
9.make the snout a teensy bit longer

Hope it helps!

ignore my mane and wings, im bad at making those ;u;
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Re: Redlined c:

Postby corrosive_limes » Sat Apr 26, 2014 11:42 am

The only problem I see with yours is the wings OwO
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Re: Redlined c:

Postby tokariya » Sat Apr 26, 2014 11:58 am

corrosive_limes wrote:The only problem I see with yours is the wings OwO


XD thanks. ik i suck at wings. i just cant draw them ;u;
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Re: Redlined c:

Postby debris » Sun Apr 27, 2014 6:46 am

Your wings are better than mine, and that helped.
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Re: Redlined c:

Postby tokariya » Sun Apr 27, 2014 11:06 am

Lone White Wolf wrote:Your wings are better than mine, and that helped.

XD and glad it did. c:
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