Redline by tokariya

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Redline

Postby tokariya » Fri Mar 07, 2014 2:26 pm

Im not that good, but i hope this helps ^^

1.you are already pretty good, just need a few fixes
2.the snout is not supposed to point up that far
3.the ears are supposed to be the same size, on yours, one was bigger than the other
4.make the tail more fluffy, and less spikey c:
5.make the legs curve a little bit, to show the joints, a cats legs are not perfectly straight c:
6.optional, but you should add some lashes on the bottom lid c:
7.add the part of the ear that actually shows the ear part.. um idk what its called XD
8.make the body a teensy bit longer, its too short
9.i think your set! i hope i didnt miss anything c:

Hope it helps. XD
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Re: Redline

Postby Paper.dragonflies » Wed Mar 12, 2014 11:22 am

the tips definitely helped! thank you ^ ^
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