[Golden Griffin]

The huge dog jumped at Lily, forcing her onto her back. She yelped in pain and surprise as he landed on top of her. His smirking lacerated muzzle pushed towards her and his wounded paws bled freely over her coat.
"I saw you watching me sweetheart," he whispered in Lily's ear and she shivered in fear. He pulled back and she saw his smirk had been replaced with a snarl.
"And I can't have people watching me", his voice was filled with anger now. Lily's eyes widened.
"I'm so sorry sweetheart," he opened his mouth, revealing a row of sharp teeth. He growled and lunged forward.
Lily's howl of pain was cut short.

What do you think?

[Inudog]

i love it

[Queen Hydra]

The bad one's eyes look like a heart. The red part, at least.
Oh, it's cool, by the way.

[Golden Griffin]

i love it

Thank you!

The bad one's eyes look like a heart. The red part, at least.
Oh, it's cool, by the way.

Haha, I'd never noticed that before. Thank you!