[grafaiai]

I'm sorry I didn't end up using the lines ;A;
hope that's okay;;;
i had a hard time with the head shape on a standard mlp body;

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I would change the tail to resemble a moose's tail more, but that's more a matter of personal preference. Because she's female, I would also probably do away with the horns and give her a more distinctively moose-shaped face so you can still tell what she is. uwu
Though females of deer-like species do sometimes have horns, this is a rare mutation that is almost always paired with androgyny. A lot of MLP OCs break this rule, though, so again, it's an opinion thing.;
I might also darken both her base and her spots [They're really cute ;u;] a bit, to make her maybe a bit more standardly moose colored [if that what you were going for] and maybe add a stripe or something to her mane to add a bit more smoothness to her eye color and accent her personality somewhat. The spots on the ear are just to make it so they aren't only in one place; it's not really needed, but I feel like it makes the design feel more consistent. I also gave her moosyfeet, but they're not really needed.

[PaintLily]

This is neat, but the moose-like head makes her look like a male MLP, I'm not sure if you know this or not but male MLPs have a different head shape than female MLPs and the male head shape is something similar to the head you've drawn here.

[grafaiai]

I am aware; the majority of my characters are male.;;
Giving her some more feminine characteristics (I cannot draw eyelashes for the life of me, but eyelashes or more feminine accessories or something along those lines) would probably help with that.

[P0CKETKNIFE]

Thank you for your opinion on her design! I do agree with you that her head is not very moose-like, but I didn't want her to look too different from a regular female pony. Still, it is something to consider. I was aware that female's do not have antlers when I first made her. However, I added them because I feared without them no one would know what she was. I agree with you that her colors should be darker, I think I'm going to use that in the future. As you said, it would make her coloration more similar to a moose. I like the shorter mane idea as well!