[TheCalicoTabby]

Here's a red/greenline for you! Let me know if you can't read my writing. ^^
I tried to keep your drawing style intact, while still helping with anatomy.
In general--ticker and more curved necks and bodies, more defined joints in the legs, longer muzzles and less round heads.
Hope this helps!

[Queen_Conker]

Thank you ^^ im taking all this into note and will re-draw the lines, and see if i can improve them