[Liara]

This is just a simple redline, I'll color it in so you can see it without the original lines

A few things:

1. Trying using smoothing, it makes your lines look not so crooked
2. A few of the proportions were off, mostly the legs on the right side (the ones that are partly hidden) the back right leg isn't showing enough, and the front right one is too thick at the top and a the paw is a little too bent
3. I didn't do any of the facial features, but the eye is just a bit too long, and the mouth should probably be more straight. If you look at a picture of a cat from a profile view, their ares have a sort of triangular shape
4. The ears should be a little smaller

Other wise, great job ^.^

[nyacinth]

Thanks! ^-^ And yeah, i used to be rubbish at drawing cats - this is my first re-attempt in a while x3

[Liara]

it's a great re-attempt!

[nyacinth]

Thanks ^-^