1) Because this is not a heavy or draft horse, the legs shouldn't be so thick.
The cannon bones aren't long at all, on the front legs anyway. The forearm is generaly longer and gets skinnier towards the knee, and larger towards the shoulder.
2) Your head was nice, and almost perfect. I just re-did it to fit the redlines a little better. But the placement of the cheek wasn't accurate, and the ears were to thick and big.(and yes, I know I made mine too thick x3 whoops.)
3) Your shoulder didn't show too well and I believe it messed up the back while drawing. A horses' back can't really "'bend" or curve ilike that, they're not cats or very flexible when it comes to their backs.
4)The barrel was too skinny for a horse. Even the healthiest of horses looks rather fat from some angles. If you look at a regular horse from the front view, you can see how big their stomachs/barrels stick out like that.
5) The neck is waayyy to skinny. It wouldn't even do good for an Arabian. The shape also isn't correct.
6)Nothing really wrong, I just redlined the tail to fit the redlines better.
7) Quarters of a horse(or you know, the thighs) aren't circular. Perfect for sketching, but not in your finished product. So you can notice that I sorta made an indent right below the croup. Again, too big or thick for the body build.
8) your hooves. Way too bit and again, don't fit the body build.
I hope this helped. If you need more help, or you have questions, do PM me :3 also, look at dA for tutorials, or look on the net for photos of horses and study them well.
The cannon bones aren't long at all, on the front legs anyway. The forearm is generaly longer and gets skinnier towards the knee, and larger towards the shoulder.
2) Your head was nice, and almost perfect. I just re-did it to fit the redlines a little better. But the placement of the cheek wasn't accurate, and the ears were to thick and big.(and yes, I know I made mine too thick x3 whoops.)
3) Your shoulder didn't show too well and I believe it messed up the back while drawing. A horses' back can't really "'bend" or curve ilike that, they're not cats or very flexible when it comes to their backs.
4)The barrel was too skinny for a horse. Even the healthiest of horses looks rather fat from some angles. If you look at a regular horse from the front view, you can see how big their stomachs/barrels stick out like that.
5) The neck is waayyy to skinny. It wouldn't even do good for an Arabian. The shape also isn't correct.
6)Nothing really wrong, I just redlined the tail to fit the redlines better.
7) Quarters of a horse(or you know, the thighs) aren't circular. Perfect for sketching, but not in your finished product. So you can notice that I sorta made an indent right below the croup. Again, too big or thick for the body build.
8) your hooves. Way too bit and again, don't fit the body build.
I hope this helped. If you need more help, or you have questions, do PM me :3 also, look at dA for tutorials, or look on the net for photos of horses and study them well.
