[boxcarr]

In case you can't read my horrendous writing...

Good start, thought try these pointers.

1. Make the head a speck longer. [generally in dogs, the forehead is a little longer, but the one you have currently is fine.]
2. Keep the dip a bit shorter! [The angle is perfect, but it's way too long. Shorten it up a bit. :3]
3.The muzzle needs to be made much longer. [Look at pictures if you want a better reference. ^^]
4. Don't forget to include a chin! [Just follow the muzzle line down into a mouth, then come off the bottom of that for the chin]
5. Add fluff if you want to, especially around the neck area. :3 [This is completely optional, but it looks nicer to add a bit of fur]

I really hope this helps, Ella. :D Keep up the great work; you're off to a great start. c:

[.:Willow:.]

thank you very much. i such at using mouse so i understand many of the things you mentioned. i can draw. but online in real life. me and the mouse have an odd relationship... mind if branch off using you suggestions?

[boxcarr]

Sure, go ahead. :'3