- ⊰ Alright. c: I redlined it for you. Well, blue lined it. Your lines are in red.
- ⊰ Your human wasn't actually all that bad. the only thing that was really noticeable was the head. I thought it was a bit too large for the body.
- ⊰ The ponytail doesn't actually stick out to the side like that. To make it look better, you should try making it fall off the shoulder, like how I drew it. Also, I couldn't really get that tuft of hair on the side of the head, so I didn't draw it. Sorry. ;-;
- ⊰ Another thing that was off was the.. er... chest area. xD Notice how it's not rounded all the way, but instead, there is a crease that shows where they are. This makes your human look a bit more realistic-ish.
- ⊰ I hoped this helped! c:
