[SerenaComa]

Congratz maria pikis on adopting this wonderful horse!!!

[maria pikis]

Owner: maria pikis
Horse's name: Violine
Age:10
Gender:Male
Breed:Lusitano
Height: 1,60 metres
Rarity: Rare
Story: A teenage girl called Marie loved horses since she was little. She never had a horse, and having one was her dream. She begged her parents for one, but they didn´t have enough money to have a horse. So, she rode a very beatiful horse called Violine that belonged to her teacher. Violine was brown, with a white stipe on his head and his tail and mane were brown. Marie had already fallen a dozen times and once hurt herself alot, so she was traumatised to fall again. But Violine conquered her. He had a lovely gallop, smooth like the wind, and Marie loved him. So, she started to gain trust again in horses, and gained more confidence then ever. One day, Marie decided do begin to jump again. In the first jump, Violine flew like the wind, and was absolutely perfect. Day after day they got better, so she decided to enter a jumping contest. They trained very very hard together, and in the show day, they were absolutely amazing. Violine did it all. He was p-e-r-f-e-c-t, so perfect, that they wone! They started jumping higher and higher, and wining every show they entered. At last, they were qualified for the Europian Championship. Marie couldn´t believe when she got a letter saying they were invited to go to England for The Championship. Marie, her coach and her parents took Violine to England by car and the journey went quite well! When they arrived, MArie and Violine were amazed by the quantity of horses and riders there, and each one of them were amazing. But Marie never lost her hope. She and her horse trained every day like the training was the real competition. The day of the Championship came. Marie woce up at 8 am so she would traind before everyone with Violine. The competition was at 11 am. Marie trained until 9,30 am, and then equiped Violine for the competition. They were both stunning. Violine had the shiniest tack ever seen, and Marie's jacket was beatiful. They were called to the arena, and they started galloping. Marie aimed for th 1st jump, that was over before she could blink. Violine was fast as a racing car, and jumped everything without failing any. That was Marie´s best day ever. She was super happy, and even if they didnt win, she would continue being happy as she was before. The results were up. Marie and Violine had wone! They couldnt belive there eyes! Then they couldnt believe there ears. This year the prize money was even bigger than before. It was 1 million Dollars. This way, Marie could buy Violine and maintain him forever! Marie and Violine continue winning, and they are unstopable!

hope you like this... it isnt a "traditional" story, like: Violine is a wild horse, etc... but i hope you like it too!

[SerenaComa]

wow you did an amazing job, i shall wait until September the 14th maybe the 12th or 13th two see if anyone else posted a form

[maria pikis]

ok! i´m glad you liked it! it took a long time to do...XD

[Ariana Black]

The story is cool love the artwork Crevan.

[SerenaComa]

thank you and he's based on secretariat