ok, this is really bad...
Despite my awful drawing, this is what you need to do:
Your feet are amazing, great size, good definition
Your back legs are a bit short above the knee, but well defined. Lengthen above the knee, but not as much below.
Your stomach needs to be sucked in, your chest less rounded.
Your tail is great, amazing lines. It needs to flick out at the end.
Your head needs to be slanted, smaller. It is too large in comparison to the rest of the body!
The shoulders need to be more defined, raised slightly from the line of the back
Same with the hindquarters
Hope this helps!









