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Redline by Leviathan

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Artist Leviathan [gallery]
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Redline

Postby Leviathan » Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:01 pm

Your anatomy is already pretty good ^^
Especially the paws, the only thing that seemed to be missing was the dew claw, and the back paws look a little bulky.

The forehead sloped a little to fast and far, it should be more gradual. The lower jaw comes down at an angle, not straight, and personally I don't connect the cheek fluff to the ear but that's just me. The belly shouldn't be a straight line, if it's a healthy fit wolf, the rib cage is the only mostly flat part, which starts curving up to the stomach/groin area.

Your ears are also a little too sharp and skinny, but overall very nice TP!

Hope this helps, I only had my laptop track pad so I couldn't point these things out on the actual picture.
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Re: Redline

Postby *QUIT* » Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:24 pm

Thanks! This helped a ton. But with the belly comment this is my excuse; wolves normally have long belly fur that hangs off their stomach(summer not included) and so that is why there is a light furry line above the bottom fur line that represents the actual ribline.

But seriously, this helped alot.
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Re: Redline

Postby Leviathan » Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:34 pm

toiletpaper wrote:Thanks! This helped a ton. But with the belly comment this is my excuse; wolves normally have long belly fur that hangs off their stomach(summer not included) and so that is why there is a light furry line above the bottom fur line that represents the actual ribline.

But seriously, this helped alot.


Lol no problem ^^
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