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red line :) by SketchedMoon

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red line :)

Postby SketchedMoon » Sat Oct 29, 2011 10:43 am

ok, please red line this wolf/dog thing x3 i made also if you could tell me what you think it would mean a lot to me thanks :D
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Re: red line :)

Postby Sparrow The Fox » Mon Oct 31, 2011 4:51 am

Okay, I'd draw up a wolf on the computer if I could, but I'm not good at drawing digitally. However I can tell you what needs to be fixed.
The muzzle/head is what really bothers me, they dont fit together. The head has a bit of an oval shape. It should be like rectangle(muzzle) and uneven circle(skull). Thats how I would draw the basic shape. The hill between the nose and head is to curved. It looks a little greyhound like. (Just the head not the body)
Look at these,
http://tebyx.deviantart.com/art/Wolf-An ... -169671166
http://junryou-na-kokoro.deviantart.com ... 4#/d1to2mr
Please don't perceive me as a prick ... this is my way of redlining art since mine would look like a toddlers next to anyones drawing. I know how hard it is to draw and I feel like I'm always off when I draw.
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Re: red line :)

Postby ♪♫ Hawky ♪♫ » Mon Oct 31, 2011 1:28 pm

I redlined it. :) Check my pic for some tips!
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Re: red line :)

Postby LTwoof » Mon Oct 31, 2011 3:24 pm

YUSH! I will redline this one too -_-
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Re: red line :)

Postby Susiron » Wed Nov 02, 2011 7:55 pm

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Re: red line :)

Postby SketchedMoon » Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:20 am

^^ thanks! :D
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Re: red line :)

Postby SketchedMoon » Sun Nov 06, 2011 1:37 pm

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Re: red line :)

Postby Mew » Sun Nov 06, 2011 1:54 pm

Always try and use references.
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Re: red line :)

Postby NuttyMuffins » Wed Nov 09, 2011 11:06 pm

Just so you know, I red lined for you. Theres a good amount of info in the picture and artist's comments. C: Hope I helped! It was fun C;
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Re: red line :)

Postby angel23456 » Mon Nov 14, 2011 9:10 am

Some of the people who've made these red-lines need red-lines themselves. :) And no, I'm not trying to be mean.
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