[Rachael Ray]

criticism appreciated
or you can redline
I was tired when I made this so I accidentally put in editable

[Kiiboio <3]

You're a great artist! But the proportions are off a bit... The head and neck are a bit small for the body and the tail is a bit too thick. But the expression is very nice! (I'm not that good either, I keep making drawings and never post them D: )

[lostmelody.]

So, umm... do you want us to reline it or something? Because it's in editable okaeki...
Anyway, on to the things you might want to consider working on!
1. The head is a little too small, you might want to make a bit bigger, and maybe a bit wider, too.
2. The front leg is too large, so try shrinking it?
3. The back is too big, that, or it's the head making it look big. Try lowering the back, maybe?

You know when you look in a drawing book, and it has the skeletons, then it does the lines, like the head and legs, all that stuff, then it gets rid of the skeleton? Try doing the skeleton on one layer, then fading the opacity half way. Then draw the lines and detail over top. You can then delete the first layer, so you don't have to rub anything out. In my opinion, it makes it easier to get good anatomy. That's what I do. Maybe you could try it?

[Rachael Ray]

So, umm... do you want us to reline it or something? Because it's in editable okaeki...
Anyway, on to the things you might want to consider working on!
1. The head is a little too small, you might want to make a bit bigger, and maybe a bit wider, too.
2. The front leg is too large, so try shrinking it?
3. The back is too big, that, or it's the head making it look big. Try lowering the back, maybe?

You know when you look in a drawing book, and it has the skeletons, then it does the lines, like the head and legs, all that stuff, then it gets rid of the skeleton? Try doing the skeleton on one layer, then fading the opacity half way. Then draw the lines and detail over top. You can then delete the first layer, so you don't have to rub anything out. In my opinion, it makes it easier to get good anatomy. That's what I do. Maybe you could try it?

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I didn't even notice it was in editable
I was tired when I made this
I could try that out thanks !

[✦ Slim4fun ✦]

I like the face expression! and the idea that you drew it in is creative, also I like your cartoon style. <3

[Rachael Ray]

I like the face expression! and the idea that you drew it in is creative, also I like your cartoon style. <3

thanks !!