by Robinfeatherx » Tue Jan 03, 2012 11:45 pm
This is good, but needs improvement. I'm sorry if I sound mean, I want to help. :3 And I'm also one of the worst, so I shouldn't be saying this.
You could work on detail. Most things here are, such as the tree, a solid colour. You could add different colours for the tree, different shades of green. Also the grass, it's a very good effort. But I think you should do more, because three bunches of grass in the middle of a vast land of green looks kind of weird. [No offence D:] Some ideas: add clouds, maybe leaves, more grass.
Also, I think you should have a focus. A main thing. If you want it to be the wolf, it should be in the middle, not the corner. If the tree, that's great! It's big, not hidden in the corner, and stands out.
I hoped I helped you. And I hoped I don't sound mean. D:
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