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*Lost In Snow; A Wolf Comic* By ~Kayla_Lupin~ by MovedToNewAccount

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*Lost In Snow; A Wolf Comic* By ~Kayla_Lupin~

Postby MovedToNewAccount » Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:09 pm

Yay! First page!

Maple: *Howling*
Stone: *Walking towards Maple after hunting in woods*
Stone: "Still no reply?"
Maple: "Nope."

Maple(Brown wolf): Me
Stone(Gray Wolf): lolpeaceoutlol

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Re: *Lost In Snow; A Wolf Comic* By ~Kayla_Lupin~

Postby Peaceful_Chaos » Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:15 pm

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For Example click this! :) Lol
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Re: *Lost In Snow; A Wolf Comic* By ~Kayla_Lupin~

Postby MovedToNewAccount » Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:23 pm

lol, okay thanks!
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Postby lolpeaceoutlol » Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:34 pm

tips: the muzzle is a bit long and a bit skinny. And don't forgot the indent in the wolf's heads when you draw. Also i suggest shading. And don't be afraid to change hte wolf's pose. IT makes it more entertaining.
I like your comic so far. :D
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Re: *Lost In Snow; A Wolf Comic* By ~Kayla_Lupin~

Postby MovedToNewAccount » Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:35 pm

lol sorry, thanks tho!
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Re: *Lost In Snow; A Wolf Comic* By ~Kayla_Lupin~

Postby MovedToNewAccount » Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:45 pm

Fixed it.
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Re: *Lost In Snow; A Wolf Comic* By ~Kayla_Lupin~

Postby Peaceful_Chaos » Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:31 pm

MUFFIN tips:
Your wolves also have the nose on the end of their snout which is, no offense, kind of weird looking... you should make the end of their nose more square, often times the bottom jaw is rather small, and the nose is on the top-corner of their squarish snout.
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Re: *Lost In Snow; A Wolf Comic* By ~Kayla_Lupin~

Postby lolpeaceoutlol » Mon Nov 07, 2011 3:32 pm

how about you draw a wolf and i can redline it for you to help you out a little. :D
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Re: *Lost In Snow; A Wolf Comic* By ~Kayla_Lupin~

Postby MovedToNewAccount » Mon Nov 07, 2011 3:34 pm

Okay
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