[WintersCatch]

hi, im hawktalon. im a medicine cat, and as you know, im not allowed mates, or kits, but i broke that rule. i was in love with ravenheart, a young tom in my clan. we would go off together, telling our deputy or any snoopy cats i was colecting herbs, but, realy we would go to our secret grove. after a while i found out i became pregnant.i told my clan i had a mesage from starclan, and needed to go to the sun-drown place. i went out of the teritorys of all four of the clans, and had my kits. i left them with a loner i had met while i went to get ravenheart, to bring him to our kits. when i got there, i saw him with another she-cat. jealosy and heart-ache panged at my belly. when i got the chance, i talked to him alone, he insited to bring rosepelt, the she-cat he had been with and his, mate, to the kits. i told him no, but he brought her anyway. eventuly we were able to bring them into camp, saying they where rosepelts kits. i thought they would live a happy life, at least they had their real father. there where three, one with a black pelt like his father, named darkkit, a tom that looked like me, but no one ever noticed, and he was called spottedkit,the last was a wee she-cat named snowkit, she was white with a few black flecks. i was glad for them. when they where aprentices, their father brought them to our special grove, and told them the truth about them. he told them he had never loved them, he hated them! his own kits, and then at that he started to atack them, trying to kill them. he went at snowpaw first, her being the weakest, and then after she was, dead, darkpaw, who had tried to stop him. spottedpaw had been crouched, whatching with wide, horified eyes. when darkpaw was on the brink of death, he atacked his father.

ill take it from here mom. im spottedpaw, and ill tell my side now, my mother wasnt there, of course.
my pelt was bristling,waves of hate, confusion poured out.i wanted venganceon my father. now, he was staring at me with wide, horified eyes, though i had no idea why. i grabbed him in my jaws and shook him vicously, and then i relized. i was much bigger than him, my pelt was gray. i had changed into a wolf. i felt bones crunch in myjaws and dropped my father. i felt myself changing back into spottedpaw. i crouched over darkpaw. the two of us, with darkpaws last breaths, wished snowpaw into starclan. then they died. darkpaw told me not to be scared,but i was. i knew i couldnt stay in the clan. as he took his last breath, i heard bushes rustle behind me. it was my mom, my real, mom.she had seen everything. she told me i should run,but i didnt listen. i went strait back to camp, lepted on highrock, and called the entier clan there. i told them what had happened, ignoring their hisses. when i finished, i headed for the camp entrance, but my leader stopped me. he said he knows i have to leave, that he was banishing me. but, he had enough of a heart to grant me my warrior name, manypelts, then had the entire clan chase me off. i became a loner, and travled far away from the clans, and eventuly found more. i decided to live in the teritories of the three clans.
i never saw my mother again, but, i know darkpaw is always at my side, even if i cant see him.

[roob.]

Wow! You got me interested! (I'm not a fan of Warriors, so that's saying a lot! ) I hope we can hear more about Hawntalon!

Best wishes,
JJ

[WintersCatch]

thanks you ^_^ im changing slowly from my box-headed cats to more like this XD

[WintersCatch]

ok, the storie has been added :3 she and manypelt are my favorit charactor of mine :3