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Sky by Alice's Rose

Artist Alice's Rose [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 55 minutes
Drawing sessions 6
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Sky

Postby Alice's Rose » Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:52 am

this is a dragon character of mine in human form! I'm gonna finish the shading on her shirt, I wanted to post what i had, cuz it's pretty much done. ^.^ plz comment/critique 8-)
EDIT: lol, I drew this a while ago, and realized some of the coloring was messy round the lines, so i tweeked it a bit. comments and critiques welcome as always. :mrgreen:
Last edited by Alice's Rose on Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:54 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Sky

Postby noel. » Fri Aug 06, 2010 3:10 am

I would try making the shading a bit neater because in some spots in the shading that aren't filled in. Try using the 'smooth' option and lock alpha for the shading. Like put hair on a layer above the skin, color, and then use lock alpha and shade becaus eit will keep the shading from going off the hair. Same for the skin, but do that on a layer below the hair. I usually do the clothes on the same layer as hair. :3 You can also use burn (makes things darker, just play with the color and opacity to make sure it doesn't make the area you use it on black) and dodge (makes things lighter). SOrry, I'm not good at explainign things. XP

I hope this helped. It's pretty good. :3
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Re: Sky

Postby Alice's Rose » Fri Aug 06, 2010 4:22 am

thank you! if there are any more suggestions for improvement, plz tell me! :D
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Re: Sky

Postby Alice's Rose » Fri Aug 06, 2010 1:28 pm

kk, I fixed it a little! lemme know how y'all liken it! :mrgreen:
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Re: Sky

Postby noel. » Fri Aug 06, 2010 1:32 pm

EEP! It's so much better than before. I love it.
But just so ya' know on the head I can see some of the blue above the orange.
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Re: Sky

Postby Alice's Rose » Mon Oct 11, 2010 1:48 pm

thankies! And okies, i fixed a little of the blue.
yeah, i know it took me like a month to respond, but i honestly forgot about this random doodle, lol.
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srry for the delay
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