by MissRose » Sun Jan 17, 2010 5:09 am
((Much better. Cute pets ^^ Accepted ))
Jake stared up at the sky with his arms around Alia as she slept. He had a feeling ((oooooh ooooh sorry, I couldn't resist)) that today was not going to go very well at all for him. Not very well at all. He looked down at his beloved Alia's peaceful face. It was so pale, so smooth and creamy. She had changed since she was twelve years old. All of it, had happened so fast. The war, the being ripped away from his Alia, the Change...and now. Now they were back together. And he would never lose her again.
Alia hugged Jake, and then turned to the side in her sleep.
When Alia released Jake, he hopped off the bed. He needed to go, to get his punishment now, to lead the Darks away from his precious Alia. He was going to fly, but then he realized he couldn't leave her unprotected. He started to make two dogs. Guard dogs. And then, he took Black Horizon, and left. He flew back to the city. New York was one of the places he could keep his wings, seeing as the New Yorkers have probably seen weirder, and there are Angel impersonators all over the city. But, he never kept them. He shrunk his gray wings into his back. He wanted to fight somebody, do something to make his wings black...what to do?
Alia awoke suddenly, startled by Jake's absence. Then she noticed the dogs. Two big-german shepereds, only the color of their fur was like storm clouds. Definately Jake's handiwork. The bed, the blankets, everything had Jake's name written all over it. She smiled, and looked down at the dogs, who jumped on the bed and licked her face. She laughed, and pushed them off her. "Sit," she said, and the dogs obediently obeyed. One girl, one boy. They walked closer to her on the soft bed and layed down beside her. "Names...hmm...names. Okay, then, girl, you're Spark. Boy, you're Storm. Problem solved," Alia said, grinning, and petting them. Jake had always knew she wanted a dog. She looked down at her blood-stained clothes, and made a face. She jumped off the bed, and the dogs started to follow her, but she said, "Stay. I'm just changing."
Spark and Storm obeyed her.
Alia, in the woods, shed her blood-stained clothing. She decided to use a little sun-power. She whipped beams around her, and when she was finished, she came out in a long light yellow dress with spaghetti-straps. It warmed her, since it was made of sunlight, and glowed yellow slightly. The dogs jumped around excitedly. Alia laughed. "Silly puppies," she said, petting them. Yeah, this was like Jake, alright.
I will always be thankful for chickensmoothie and awesomesauce for cultivating in me a love for collaborating with others to create something great. This community has always been and will hopefully continue to be amazing! Young little RPers that are just starting out, my advice to you is KEEP GOING! As you mature, so will your writing, I know that roleplaying did wonders for mine, even though I was terrible when I first started. Keep on keeping on, chickensmoothie!Also staff if possible please never delete my account because i love to get back on and read what was once long ago lol
If you edit it, I'll accept. ))
