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[stanzathemanza]

(Okay. Currently, Jade is in her room, she thinks she's getting the flu. She and Kaleb just went to watch I am Number Four)

[Richie's Gal Forever]

Melya

I came out of the classroom and laid in the grass again. I had no clue of what to do.

Camilla

I laid next to Melya. "Hey, Mel." I smiled.

Melya

"Oh. Hey, Cam." I said.

[stanzathemanza]

Eventually Jade heard a knock at her door. "Um.. come in?" She said groggily. She looked up. It was Ray. He shuffled around at the door for a few moments.

Finally, he spoke. "You okay?" And Jade felt relief wash through her. This meant they were friends again.

"I think so. I think I might just be getting over the flu. I've slept for like three days." She laughed lightly, but she could see that Ray was worried about her. "Really, I'm fine." She stood shakily and leaned against the bedpost.

[Richie's Gal Forever]

Camilla

"Oh. By the way, Mel. Someone in the office is here to see you." I said.

Melya

"Okay." I sighed. I walked to the office and saw my uncle. "What the hell are you doing here?" I asked him, my voice shaking with fear. "Something I think you deserve. Follow me." My uncle said. Without letting me have a chance to resist, he grabbed my wrist and pulled me to the parking lot.

[stanzathemanza]

After Ray left Jade's dorm he walked down onto the campus lawn. He saw Melya being hustled to a car by a man he didn't know. "Mel?!" He called frantically, striding quickly over to her.

[Richie's Gal Forever]

((it was Melya not Cam.))

Melya

I was crying by the time we were in the parking lot. "Shut up and get over it." He snapped. He pushed me so hard, I fell to the ground. "Please. Quit." I begged. He was abusing me in the middle of the college parking lot.

[stanzathemanza]

((Okay, sorry about that - He's still worried for her)) "Mel?!" He ran toward her but stopped when he saw her uncle. "Don't hurt her!" He yelled.

[Richie's Gal Forever]

Melya

"Stay out of this, boy." My uncle said. "Please." I said. I was barely conscious. "Shut up." My uncle said, slapping me. That did it. I was unconscious.

[stanzathemanza]

Ray didn't know what to do. Melya lay unconscious on the asphalt, blood running in tracks down her face. And her uncle was about to drag her into the car... "STOP IT!" Ray shouted, lunging at her uncle. He managed to knock him to the ground.

[Richie's Gal Forever]

Melya
I lay unconscious. My uncle hit the ground and hit the ground, falling unconscious as his head hit the ground.