by ShadowWolf26 » Fri Oct 15, 2010 11:29 am
(Would you mind using punctuation marks? Capitalization isn't a problem, and your spelling is good, but it's a little hard to read what you're saying when you don't put things like "." or "," and sometimes "?")
Jake walked up the school stairs with some of his football teammates, when he tripped and fell. He couldn't help but laugh along with his friends, and then purposely tripped one of them. The friend started chasing him, so he ran. He wasn't watching where he was going, so he ended up bumping into a girl doing a backflip, causing his friend to run into him and fall again. He took advantage of the situation and said to the girl, "Sorry," then continued running with a smile on his face, occaisionally looking back to make sure his friend was still down. As he ran by, he saw an old friend named Blake and waved. Then, of course, he ran into the principal. He knocked the 65 year old over, helped him up, then said, "Sorry." The principal then said, "Oh, you must be Jake... You know the drill?" Jake muttered, "Yeah..." He then walked into the principal's office, looking back to see his friend that was chasing him on the floor laughing.
Blake rode down the sidewalk on his skateboard in a hurry, not even bothering to show off and do tricks. He eventually came to the school and rode up the ramp before jumping off of his skateboard and hurrying into the building. Now that he wasn't late, he caught his breath and walked to his locker. He thought, "Aww crap..." when he remembered that he didn't write down his locker combination. Then, he remebered the code and twisted, left seven, right eight, skip left nine. He then felt stupid for forgetting a simple combination like seven, eight, nine. Just as he opened his locker, he saw his old buddy Jake run by and wave. He sighed and waved back, remebering the days before Jake got popular. They'd always hang out and do stupid, but entertaining things. One time, they built a tree house and a giant slingshot, then they fired the slingshot and destroyed the tree house.
Stephanie walked into school alone, annoyed by the fact that the first day of school had to be on a Monday when she only got two hours of sleep. She walked past a guy who she could tell was annoyed too, (Matt) and smiled. She waved and said hi, when a ton of her friends came running towards her. She thought, "Great... More peppy people..." They all began talking and shouting, and Stephanie, not in the mood, ignored them all and continued walking towards her homeroom, not even bothering to stop by her locker and unpack.
So what if you can see
The darkest side of me
Nobody will ever change this animal I have become
Animal I Have Become by Three Days Grace