((It's pretty good to me, but I'm going to admit I'm bad at judging. XD The only problem for me would be that there aren't really any weaknesses in your powers. If she's cursed, then maybe she would get weaker upon using her powers, or have less control over them or something? I can't really judge spelling, because I'm mostly saved by the spell check. We'll wait till Lawzza or Sky gets on.
And don't worry RoseAngel, most of us are the random type as well. ^^ And glad to hear you're an anime person as well.
Also, I'll make another character soon, maybe. I dunno.))
"Well, the more the merrier," said Tarel, still trying to push away the uncomfortable feeling. "I wonder where my hug is, then again you probably are guessing that I'd stab you or something while you're doing it." He didn't laugh, for once, but he honestly wouldn't hurt Kiyomi unless she was annoying him at the time. "Well, should we get going?"



