by CookieFruit » Tue Sep 28, 2010 10:13 am
(Sorry if this sounds mean, but can you write/type a bit more? And I by a bit, I mean like 2 or 3 more sentences. I usually write a lot more, but you didn't so I decided that I wouldn't either. You can't let me do the main things and you write something like 'she turned around and looked', so can you try to add something? Make it exciting or whatever. Sorry, I'm just getting a little fed up with all these one-liners)
You could hear whispers from the people here and there, but it wasn't loud to disrupt the people on stage. One of them walked up to the microphone while the others stayed back, about a foot or two away. The ones in the back looked like different people, but familiar. The person in the front tapped on the mic with his finger, and cleared his throat.
"Anywhere can be paradise, as long as you have the will to live. After all, you are alive, so you will always have the chance to be happy."
- Neon Genesis Evangelion