
My Characters wrote:
Name;; Saorise Holbrook
Age;; 18
Gender;; Female
Rank;; Greenie, she just arrived.
Personality;; Saorise is a quite complex and confusing person. Her spirit is very strong. She can be very sweet, though she is often afraid to speak her mind, an old habit from Abnegation. Saorise could be called many things, though she would describe herself as unpredictable and brave. Saorise has a certain spirit and attitude that has gotten her through many challenges. Her extreme perseverance and persistence have given her a way of carrying herself that cannot be described, though some tend to underestimate the strength in her mind. Saorise is not particularly strong in a physical sense, though she makes up for it in spirit. She is not one who will put up with much, making her seem a bit defensive at first glance. She is very patient with her friends, though not many others.
Saorise is very friendly and trusting when she gets to know someone. She can be a bit timid at times when she is unsure of herself. Her past has left her with some hidden darkness, but she tends to conceal it well. Overall, Saorise can be a great friend, you just have to bring out the best in her.
Description;; Saorise has long hair of a unique color. She likes to describe it as a strawberry caramel. Her eyes are a vibrant sea green that can appear light blue in certain light. Saorise has a few freckles around her nose, though they are not prominent. Saorise is tall and thin, making her quick and agile. She has little muscle, though she makes up for it in her incredible speed.
Strengths;; Saorise is incredible fast and has a very strong spirit.
Weaknesses;; Saorise is not very strong in a physical sense and she often goes off her gut feeling, which can be a blessing or a curse.
Name;; Luke O'Shea
Age;; 16
Gender;; Male
Rank;; Med-Jack Keeper
Personality;; Luke is often conflicted about what he feels, though he tries his best to make sense of things. Luke grew up in Dauntless with his mother, Violette, and his older brother, Kyle. Kyle was very cruel by nature, unlike Violette. Kyle would often beat Luke up after they returned home from school and because Violette was so timid, she did nothing to stop Kyle. Luke can still remember the pain of getting beat up, though he can't remember it being done. Luke learned to keep his true feelings hidden because they didn't match the what people expected. He can be very skeptical at times. Luke is often the first one to change his opinion about something, though he wouldn't mention it. He stands up for what he believes is right, though his views can get conflicted and confused. Ultimately, Luke just wants what he believes is right and he wants people he can trust.
Description;; Luke's hair is a dark black color. Luke's hair is often tussled and messy, though smoothed down in the front. His dark hair contrasts with his pale complexion. Luke has apple green eyes that shine brightly. He is very tall and fairly thin, which can make Luke appear weak. Though Luke isn't the strongest Dauntless member, he does have some strength.
Strengths;; Luke's agility and quick reaction time.
Weaknesses;; Luke has a habit of not letting people know how he really feels and he doesn't trust anyone.














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