Dr. Awkward wrote:((Hey, don't mean to sound rude, but can we slow down with the escape plan? I like to have one mega plotwist at a time. And Snow i, do you want to jump right in with getting kidnapped, or do you want me to play your kidnappers?))
Well, first Hazel has to make her 'big move' on Jaylon, which is the reason Red goes away in the first place. (Like I said, it doesn't have to be a kiss, just something missleading enough to make Roan angry.) Also, you playing the kidnappers is a great idea, but remember we talked about keeping most of it from the jabberjay's pespective, so we won't really play out much of what happens to Red. She just comes back and they start to figure out through memories and stuff. )
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Regarding the posts on Cinder and Astrid's front, the plot really would go askew if you carried out your plan now. Also, I plan on having Red missing for a while making openings for plot twists able to happen before she get's back. This big plot twist is only in the early buildup stages, so during that buildup before it really hits the fan, there's room for a lot to happen. Thanks for the patience, and not yelling at me...

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BTW for your form for Leo, the thirst is real.)
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Also, I can tell already, he and Roan are gonna be good friends.)
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Here's something else from the person who has too much to say.
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