Blood Bound: A literate teen and daemon rp

[A-train]

Username: ~Amberleaf~
Character Name: Sakura Brown
Character Gender: female
Character Appearance: pale golden hair with dark brown eyes
Character Personality: kind and caring, easily outraged
Daemon Name: Aero
Daemon Gender: male
Daemon Species: cat
Daemon Appearance: white cat with green eyes and a brown patch on his forehead
Daemon Personality: easily angered, very snappy and bold; yet cares for the ones he loves

Gah. Can I finish this later? I've gotta go now.

Done! Does this work? ^.^;

[Soccerlvr]

Pulling her zipper on her light-weight jacket up, Kayla looked at a gathering groups of people and daemons. Shaking her head, she patted Miarr on the head and gazed past them, feeling a little shy. Shrugging her backpack on her shoulders, she walked past the group, glancing at them as she went by.

[A-train]

Sakura stared at a group of people, but she was going home. It was going to be dark soon, and she never liked to be out after dark -- her parents didn't care, but she did. Aero was a small cat, and he was draped around her shoulders, a bit like a towel, she mused.

[Jerry]

Username: ~Amberleaf~
Character Name: Sakura Brown
Character Gender: female
Character Appearance: pale golden hair with dark brown eyes
Character Personality: kind and caring, easily outraged
Daemon Name: Aero
Daemon Gender: male
Daemon Species: cat
Daemon Appearance: white cat with green eyes and a brown patch on his forehead
Daemon Personality: easily angered, very snappy and bold; yet cares for the ones he loves

Gah. Can I finish this later? I've gotta go now.

Done! Does this work? ^.^;

accepted

[Jerry]

( I drew Nikita :3

[A-train]

Sakura quickly walked home, and logged onto Facebook when she got up to the computer in her bedroom. It was a new model, a Dell Studio laptop. Her parents were fairly wealthy, and she didn't only use this laptop for fun and play, anyway -- it was for school, too.

Her friend was on. She sent a message.
AIMEE SAKRON: hi
YOU: Hey.
AIMEE: lol wat u up 2?
YOU: Nothing much. Just got home.
AIMEE: omg my daemon got her tru form 2day
YOU: Really? Awesome!

Aimee was only 12.

AIMEE: ya. patsy's a cinnamon conure. awsum bird.
YOU: Congrats! I saw one of those in a pet shop once.
AIMEE: whups! g2g. c u l8r m8b?
YOU: Uhh, sure. Byees!
AIMEE: bya
Aimee Sakron has logged off.

Sakura sighed, and logged onto another site.... Chicken Smoothie.

[Jerry]

Sakura quickly walked home, and logged onto Facebook when she got up to the computer in her bedroom. It was a new model, a Dell Studio laptop. Her parents were fairly wealthy, and she didn't only use this laptop for fun and play, anyway -- it was for school, too.

Her friend was on. She sent a message.
AIMEE SAKRON: hi
YOU: Hey.
AIMEE: lol wat u up 2?
YOU: Nothing much. Just got home.
AIMEE: omg my daemon got her tru form 2day
YOU: Really? Awesome!

Aimee was only 12.

AIMEE: ya. patsy's a cinnamon conure. awsum bird.
YOU: Congrats! I saw one of those in a pet shop once.
AIMEE: whups! g2g. c u l8r m8b?
YOU: Uhh, sure. Byees!
AIMEE: bya
Aimee Sakron has logged off.

Sakura sighed, and logged onto another site.... Chicken Smoothie.

Um please stick to the plot line.

[Kari Lion]

((Seriously, there is already something going on here. Why don't you stick to the plot and interact with characters? What's the point of having you character sitting at home on her computer. wth.))

[A-train]

(Not quite sure what's going on. Nobody's interacting with my character, so I thought.... Well, that was really just a filler. )

Sakura got up, closed the laptop, put on her coat, and went outside into the cool night air.

(Where are the characters?)

[Kari Lion]

(Not quite sure what's going on. Nobody's interacting with my character, so I thought.... Well, that was really just a filler. )

Sakura got up, closed the laptop, put on her coat, and went outside into the cool night air.

(Where are the characters?)

((Why don't you read through the posts of the past few pages? You will see that the kids are all gathering at school on the first day of school, and see where people are sort of grouped together. Your posts have your character being way off both location wise and time wise))