A Long Recovery | (Human Roleplay) | Semi-Literate

[Versa_Mythology]

"So," Gabriel repeated, unsur eof what to do. He stared coldly at his own feet, unable to remember what he wanted to say. "Maybe..." he started, but didn't finnish, not getting the courage. "Do...you want to hange out some time? Like...to talk and....stuff,"

[Moondancer]

Samuel looked down, biting his lip. He wasn't used to talking this much; he didn't think he'd had a proper conversation that didn't end with him being expelled from another school in the past 6 years. "Uhh" he stuttered, now having to concentrate to stop himself from muttering in French "Su... sure"

[Versa_Mythology]

Gabriel nodded as Samual said this, and looked at him slowly. "Alright," he said, without smiling, or frowning. He looked speechless, almost, as he sat on the counter

[Moondancer]

Samuel leaned against the counter beside Gabriel, absentmindedly fingering the packet of cigarettes he kept in his jeans pocket. He'd only managed to sneak one packet in and didn't want to use them up. He kept fingering them, trying to keep his mind off it. He glanced at Gabriel, who seemed almost catatonic.

[Versa_Mythology]

His eyes were dark and pupilless, his mind blank and his memory "shut off". It usually happened to him when he wasn't feeling too well. He tilted, teetering on the counter, and then fell forward, hitting the floor without moving any inch of his body.

[Moondancer]

"Gabriel?" Samuel asked quietly as the other boy began to sway. As Gabriel fell from the counter, Samuel gasped and immediately dropped to his side, too late to catch him. Samuel rolled him over carefully, checking for a pulse and breathing a sigh of relief when he found one. "Gabriel?" he asked again, watching his face for any signs of conciousness.

[Versa_Mythology]

Gabriel didn't move, his eyes seeming glassy. He finnally gave a faint groan, his eyes seeming to darken when heblinked back the tears of pain. He slowly turned his gaze to Samual, rubbing his forhead silently. Wh...What happened?" he asked slowly, confused as to why he was on the floor. He didn't even remember falling

[Dogs Can Bark]

15. Please use proper grammer. (Spell correctly, use proper spacing and punctuation.)
16. Don't be really dramatic, to me a majorly melodramatic roleplayer is no fun.

I added two new rules, hopefully they take affect.