Warrior Cat Names {Critiques and Advice} {Traditional}

[blue neighbourhood]

Thanks! ^^
(This is great advice, thanks so much c:) Maybe changing the Swift to Lily(?) And the -heart to foot? Lilyfoot, does that work? xD And I think Willowwhisker? Thanks again for the suggestions x3

[detective who.]

As long as she's predominantly white, I think Lilyfoot is perfect for your molly. Willowwhisker is just dandy as well.

I'm glad I could be of assistance. Have a good day~

[Silverstar012345]

name: Silverstar
color: Silver-white
postion: leader of Auroraclan

name:Blacksilver
color: black and white
postion: Deputy of Auroraclan

[detective who.]

Hello, Silverstar, and welcome to Chickensmoothie. Sorry I didn't get to this sooner; I've been a bit busy.

Silverstar - This name is fine. The prefix fits perfectly, and from what you've given me, that's all I can judge.

Blacksilver - The prefix is perfect, but I'm not sure what the suffix is for; it doesn't tell me anything about the skills or personality of this cat. It might tell me that he's black and silver, but he's not; he's black and white. If you tell me more about his skills and personality, I can help you with a more fitting suffix for him, if you'd like.

If you have any questions, go ahead and PM me or make another post~

[Simonpet]

Name: Gingerstorm
Description: Gingerstorm is a ginger tabby with mackerel striping.
Skill/Personality Notes: Gingerstorm is an average warrior, though her personality, much like a storm, changes with the wind.

Name: Birchclaw
Description: Birchclaw is a silver tabby with dark stripes and mackerel striping.
Skill/Personality Notes: Birchclaw is strong and good at fighting, however, in order to be good at it, he is also fairly clever. He usually knows when he is going to far unlike one of his siblings. *cough cough Cherryfang*

Name: Cherryfang
Description: Cherryfang is a fawn tabby with reddish stripes and mackerel striping.
Skill/Personality Notes: Cherryfang is pretty good at both hunting and fighting. She can be fairly rash and outspoken, and is loyal to both clan and kin.

Name: Pikepelt
Description: Pikepelt is a golden-brown tabby with grey-brown stripes and mackerel striping.
Skill/Personality Notes: Pikepelt isn't particularly strong in any skill category, and doesn't have any notable personality traits either.

[detective who.]

Hello, Simonpet!

Gingerstorm - Nothing to remark on here. Her name is excellent.

Birchclaw - Perfectly fitting name. He's got an interesting personality, too.

Cherryfang - Her suffix is fine, but I'm not sure about her prefix. She seems a bit too light for cherry-, which usually indicates dark ginger or white. I'm not sure how well this would work for such a light cat.

Pikepelt - His name fits perfectly. Nothing to change here.

Thank you for submitting~

[Simonpet]

Hello, Simonpet!

Gingerstorm - Nothing to remark on here. Her name is excellent.

Birchclaw - Perfectly fitting name. He's got an interesting personality, too.

Cherryfang - Her suffix is fine, but I'm not sure about her prefix. She seems a bit too light for cherry-, which usually indicates dark ginger or white. I'm not sure how well this would work for such a light cat.

Pikepelt - His name fits perfectly. Nothing to change here.

Thank you for submitting~

About Cherryfang, I thought that a light fawn tabby would look somewhat like an actual cherry (pink). What could I change about her coloring to make her prefix fit?

[detective who.]

The thing with cherry- is that it's off the wild cherry, which has very dark red berries.
I'm trying to suggest prefixes less, now that I've linked Ailuronymy's lists (which I ought to have done a long time ago). They're toward the bottom of the first post. I suggest you give the Ginger/red section of the prefix list a look, and see what you can find.

[Simonpet]

I have two more in: Birchclaw's kits. Since they are all based off of my actual characters, their descriptions may not be realistic enough. Please tell me what I can do for to fix that.

Name: Laurelkit
Description: Laurelkit is white with bright blue eyes. She may/may not be deaf. The character I based her off of has a silver tail-tip and front paws. Any way to have that?
Skill/Personality Notes: Haven't developed her that far.

Name: Lichenkit
Description: Lichenkit is a tortoiseshell, mostly grey with white and black mixed fairly evenly and has dark green eyes.
Skill/Personality Notes: Haven't developed her that far.

[detective who.]

This is tough; I know very little about cat genetics. I'll do my best, but there are definitely people on here who know more about this sort of thing than I do.

I'm not positive on Laurelkit's colouring. I know there are white cats that have tabby striping on the head and tail, like this fellow, but I don't know if grey on just the tail and paws is possible. That reminds me of whitespotting, but I don't know if it can work like that. I suggest checking this chart or looking around on Messybeast for more information.

Lichenkit looks like a dilute calico on the picture you linked. That said, I could be wrong, and it would be best to do some research past what I've just done.

Edit;; You might ask the person who made the kittens if they know for sure if the genetics all work out. If they don't, I'd recommend sending an ask to WarriorsOCHelp on tumblr; they answer asks about genetics quite frequently.