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@Silent Symphony: I love this story. <3
BlissfulFarrago wrote:
Fiammeta [♀] and Cookieness [♂]
"Does anyone ever, really, know what they are doing?" she asked me, eyes glowing in the light of fire held in her hand. Then she left me, disappearing into the night.
I watched her go. Fiammeta, my vigilante, my arsonist. My love.
Ah...full story times, yay? 83 [Cookieness is Colv in the story...since "Cookieness" isn't exactly a name for a human. xD]
We stood in the dark field. Deep down, even if I denied it, I knew that Fiammeta was leaving for a long while, possible forever. We were only fifteen. How could she be leaving?
"There's something...I need to show you something," I said, grasping the piece of paper in my pocket.
"No," Fiammeta replied. No explanation. She lit the branch from her lantern, preparing for one last act of arson to right some evil before she left.
"What are you doing?" I said despairingly to the stars; I couldn't imagine life without her. It wasn't even a question, just a sad statement.
"Does anyone ever, really, know what they are doing?" she asked me, eyes glowing in the light of fire held in her hand. She placed her hand against my right cheek, her eyes searching my face. I could have died right there. "Colv...you're a fool for loving me."
Then she left me, disappearing into the night.
I watched her go. My Fiammeta, my vigilante, my arsonist. My love.
...Seven Years Later...
I stood at my booth in the market, searching the crowd with my eyes. Normally, I should be selling my wares, beautiful jewelry I made, on a Saturday like this. Even if it earned me some amused looks from other men, I loved what I did. But the piece I loved the most was the one I had designed seven years ago, and always kept in my pocket, ownerless. It was a single, luminous, blue-gray stone, surrounded by brown gems that swirled and dotted in a familiar pattern.
But I wasn't selling today. For the market was a breeding ground for gossip, and for the past week or so, a rumor had been going around that the miller had raped the innkeeper's daughter. It probably wasn't true: few of the rumors were. But last night, the miller's mill was burned to the ground. I only knew one person who would be foolish and brave enough to do that. And with fire, no less.
Suddenly, I got the feeling that someone was watching me. Slowly, I rotated my head. A head of long brown hair turned swiftly, and the slim, long body attached to it began to walk swiftly away.
"Watch my stall!" I called to to Pargi, the woman who's stall was next to mine. I didn't wait for her response as I sprinted through the crowd after the figure. After her. I knew it must be her.
She was fast, but I was faster. I reached her, and soon, she was on the ground, with me sitting on top of her. Quickly, I ran my finger across the bare skin around next to her eye. Powder clung to my finger, and a little brown tattoo peaked through. I smiled. It was Fiammeta. I thought I felt the ring in my pocket twitch, so close to it's rightful owner.
"Well done," she said, a smirk spreading across her face. "Has little Colvy-boy gotten a little bolder since we last met?" I tried to form some sort of response, but was too shocked and giddy to do so.
"Um...Colv. You might want to get off me," Fiammeta said. She looked meaningfully at the shoppers and stall owners who were staring at us.
"Oh. Right," I muttered, letting her up and standing up myself. Great. Now there were probably going to be some rumors going around about me within the hour. Fiammeta and I got out of the market quickly.
...
Back at my cottage, I was angry. Furious.
"Metta, how could you burn down Bervn's mill? Ninety percent of the rumors in the market are false!" I exclaimed, running a hand through my hair and turning away from her.
"I'd rather destroy an innocent man's house than let a guilty one's stand," she replied.
"Fiammeta, this isn't a shed or a sheep fence anymore!" I said, practically shouting. I cursed. "This is the man's livelihood we're talking about!" I expected a joke about how little "Colvy-pie" could curse, or at least an "I don't care." But no response came. I turned back towards her, surprised. She was staring into space, her eyes glazed over like they always were when she was trying not to cry.
Suddenly I remembered. Why she Fiammeta had been crying when I met her, why she had run away from home at age ten, why she did what she did. I had never thought about it, never wanted to think about how someone could bear to hurt my darling Fia.
"Oh," I said. "Oh, Met. Oh, Metta." I went to her and hugged her to me.
...Ending One...Colv's Ending...
A week later, she was leaving again. I couldn't blame her. The authorities were taking an interest in the fire at the mill, and Fiammeta had to leave before they figured out it was her.
We were standing in the field where she had left ten years ago, except now it was twilight, not black night.
"Come with me," she said, eyes pleading. "I know I told you you were a fool to love me seven years ago, but now...I see I was a fool for leaving you."
I took a deep breath. "Fia, remember how I wanted to show you something, that night seven years ago?"
She blinked. "No..."
"Well, it was the design for this." Out of my pocket I pulled the ring, the last rays of sunlight catching on it. Fiametta sucked her breath in with astonishment.
I placed my right hand on her cheek and searched her face with my eyes.
"Seven years ago, you told me I was a fool for loving you. And I was. But...I'm not a fool anymore."
I dropped my hand and walked away, leaving Fiammeta looking at the ring in her hands.
...Ending Two...Fiammeta's Ending...
A week later, she was leaving again. I couldn't blame her. The authorities were taking an interest in the fire at the mill, and Fiammeta had to leave before they figured out it was her.
We were standing in the field where she had left ten years ago, except now it was twilight, not black night.
I took a deep breath. "Fia, remember how I wanted to show you something, that night seven years ago?"
She blinked. "No..."
"Well, it was the design for this." Out of my pocket I pulled the ring, the last rays of sunlight catching on it. Fiametta sucked her breath in with astonishment.
"Fia, seven years ago, you told me I was a fool for loving you," I said, looking into her eyes. "And I am still a fool."
She looked down, shuffled her feet.
"Colv..." She looked back up at me. "I have always loved you. But it is foolish to do so.
Then she left me, disappearing into the newly-born night.
I watched her go. My Fiammeta, my vigilante, my arsonist. My love.
...Ending Three...Mushy-Shmushy Ending...
A week later, the sun shining brightly on us, I took her to where we had met as children. She had been crying, and had threatened to hit me with a stone she had in her hand. No wonder we became friends.
I took a deep breath. "Fia, remember how I wanted to show you something, that night seven years ago?"
She blinked. "No..."
"Well, it was the design for this." Out of my pocket I pulled the ring, the sunlight catching on it. Fiametta sucked her breath in with astonishment.
"You told me I was a fool for loving you." I chuckled under my breath. "And I am a fool still."
"Are you--?" Fiammeta began.
"Shh," I said. "And, " I continued, "I don't think I'll stop being a fool any time soon." I offered the ring to her.
She took it and smiled slightly. "All those years..." she said. "I thought I was protecting you, but you were protecting me the whole time. And I most certainly accept your offer, as I have always been a fool for you also."
Then, suddenly she kissed me, not waiting for me to make the first move.
Typical Metta.
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Uh...I had a few ideas for the ending that I could see working...so I wrote three. xD What do you guys think? ~<3
We stood in the dark field. Deep down, even if I denied it, I knew that Fiammeta was leaving for a long while, possible forever. We were only fifteen. How could she be leaving?
"There's something...I need to show you something," I said, grasping the piece of paper in my pocket.
"No," Fiammeta replied. No explanation. She lit the branch from her lantern, preparing for one last act of arson to right some evil before she left.
"What are you doing?" I said despairingly to the stars; I couldn't imagine life without her. It wasn't even a question, just a sad statement.
"Does anyone ever, really, know what they are doing?" she asked me, eyes glowing in the light of fire held in her hand. She placed her hand against my right cheek, her eyes searching my face. I could have died right there. "Colv...you're a fool for loving me."
Then she left me, disappearing into the night.
I watched her go. My Fiammeta, my vigilante, my arsonist. My love.
...Seven Years Later...
I stood at my booth in the market, searching the crowd with my eyes. Normally, I should be selling my wares, beautiful jewelry I made, on a Saturday like this. Even if it earned me some amused looks from other men, I loved what I did. But the piece I loved the most was the one I had designed seven years ago, and always kept in my pocket, ownerless. It was a single, luminous, blue-gray stone, surrounded by brown gems that swirled and dotted in a familiar pattern.
But I wasn't selling today. For the market was a breeding ground for gossip, and for the past week or so, a rumor had been going around that the miller had raped the innkeeper's daughter. It probably wasn't true: few of the rumors were. But last night, the miller's mill was burned to the ground. I only knew one person who would be foolish and brave enough to do that. And with fire, no less.
Suddenly, I got the feeling that someone was watching me. Slowly, I rotated my head. A head of long brown hair turned swiftly, and the slim, long body attached to it began to walk swiftly away.
"Watch my stall!" I called to to Pargi, the woman who's stall was next to mine. I didn't wait for her response as I sprinted through the crowd after the figure. After her. I knew it must be her.
She was fast, but I was faster. I reached her, and soon, she was on the ground, with me sitting on top of her. Quickly, I ran my finger across the bare skin around next to her eye. Powder clung to my finger, and a little brown tattoo peaked through. I smiled. It was Fiammeta. I thought I felt the ring in my pocket twitch, so close to it's rightful owner.
"Well done," she said, a smirk spreading across her face. "Has little Colvy-boy gotten a little bolder since we last met?" I tried to form some sort of response, but was too shocked and giddy to do so.
"Um...Colv. You might want to get off me," Fiammeta said. She looked meaningfully at the shoppers and stall owners who were staring at us.
"Oh. Right," I muttered, letting her up and standing up myself. Great. Now there were probably going to be some rumors going around about me within the hour. Fiammeta and I got out of the market quickly.
...
Back at my cottage, I was angry. Furious.
"Metta, how could you burn down Bervn's mill? Ninety percent of the rumors in the market are false!" I exclaimed, running a hand through my hair and turning away from her.
"I'd rather destroy an innocent man's house than let a guilty one's stand," she replied.
"Fiammeta, this isn't a shed or a sheep fence anymore!" I said, practically shouting. I cursed. "This is the man's livelihood we're talking about!" I expected a joke about how little "Colvy-pie" could curse, or at least an "I don't care." But no response came. I turned back towards her, surprised. She was staring into space, her eyes glazed over like they always were when she was trying not to cry.
Suddenly I remembered. Why she Fiammeta had been crying when I met her, why she had run away from home at age ten, why she did what she did. I had never thought about it, never wanted to think about how someone could bear to hurt my darling Fia.
"Oh," I said. "Oh, Met. Oh, Metta." I went to her and hugged her to me.
...Ending One...Colv's Ending...
A week later, she was leaving again. I couldn't blame her. The authorities were taking an interest in the fire at the mill, and Fiammeta had to leave before they figured out it was her.
We were standing in the field where she had left ten years ago, except now it was twilight, not black night.
"Come with me," she said, eyes pleading. "I know I told you you were a fool to love me seven years ago, but now...I see I was a fool for leaving you."
I took a deep breath. "Fia, remember how I wanted to show you something, that night seven years ago?"
She blinked. "No..."
"Well, it was the design for this." Out of my pocket I pulled the ring, the last rays of sunlight catching on it. Fiametta sucked her breath in with astonishment.
I placed my right hand on her cheek and searched her face with my eyes.
"Seven years ago, you told me I was a fool for loving you. And I was. But...I'm not a fool anymore."
I dropped my hand and walked away, leaving Fiammeta looking at the ring in her hands.
...Ending Two...Fiammeta's Ending...
A week later, she was leaving again. I couldn't blame her. The authorities were taking an interest in the fire at the mill, and Fiammeta had to leave before they figured out it was her.
We were standing in the field where she had left ten years ago, except now it was twilight, not black night.
I took a deep breath. "Fia, remember how I wanted to show you something, that night seven years ago?"
She blinked. "No..."
"Well, it was the design for this." Out of my pocket I pulled the ring, the last rays of sunlight catching on it. Fiametta sucked her breath in with astonishment.
"Fia, seven years ago, you told me I was a fool for loving you," I said, looking into her eyes. "And I am still a fool."
She looked down, shuffled her feet.
"Colv..." She looked back up at me. "I have always loved you. But it is foolish to do so.
Then she left me, disappearing into the newly-born night.
I watched her go. My Fiammeta, my vigilante, my arsonist. My love.
...Ending Three...Mushy-Shmushy Ending...
A week later, the sun shining brightly on us, I took her to where we had met as children. She had been crying, and had threatened to hit me with a stone she had in her hand. No wonder we became friends.
I took a deep breath. "Fia, remember how I wanted to show you something, that night seven years ago?"
She blinked. "No..."
"Well, it was the design for this." Out of my pocket I pulled the ring, the sunlight catching on it. Fiametta sucked her breath in with astonishment.
"You told me I was a fool for loving you." I chuckled under my breath. "And I am a fool still."
"Are you--?" Fiammeta began.
"Shh," I said. "And, " I continued, "I don't think I'll stop being a fool any time soon." I offered the ring to her.
She took it and smiled slightly. "All those years..." she said. "I thought I was protecting you, but you were protecting me the whole time. And I most certainly accept your offer, as I have always been a fool for you also."
Then, suddenly she kissed me, not waiting for me to make the first move.
Typical Metta.
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Uh...I had a few ideas for the ending that I could see working...so I wrote three. xD What do you guys think? ~<3


























































