Neelix wrote:Darke wrote:Neelix wrote:
Most definitely my favorite adult. ♥
I like it, but theres something off to me
Ive no idea what, but something just isnt right
I really like the cheetah, and I think it was a good idea-- but I think what really puts me off about it actually is the back fluff.
Is is a nice touch, but it looks a bit messy. While the rest of the lineart is crisp and black, it doesn't fit well, being pale and slim-- it just looks white tipped and sketchy sort of.
I think what also puts me off is that the cat has its head turned quite a ways around, but the back fluff is added as if the neck's straight, not accounting for the turn. It sort of gives me the impression that the neck fluff is riding up the side of the cat's throat, rather than the back of its neck.
Nice patterns all in all, though-- love this entire litter, especially the PPS, which I still cannot get my hands on. xD





















