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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:57 am

Sil and Sol?

Lovely drawing. I love the sketchiness of it.

I suggest, when doing the nose of anime people, maybe make them a bit pointer than how they are now. Otherwise, I really can't critique this, because I see nothing wrong with it. I'd loved to see this inked, shaded and colored though. I'm curious as to how their colors fit.
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby average » Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:58 am

This is beyond amazing. I actually love how odd the picture is, and [no offense is meant D:] the creepy feeling that comes to me when I see how childish the people look. And the ears make them look elvish, and the expressions are love. I thoroughly love everything about this picture. <3
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Clavicle » Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:26 am

Wolf-chan: Thank you. I'll consider those names. (: And, you're right about the nose, but I'm not a really big fan of manga/anime art any more, so I am trying to subtly deviate from the style. I started out with my drawings looking a lot like today's shoujo style ((large eyes, big forehead, almost invisible nose, pointy chin, etc.)) and was appalled when I looked through an old pile of my drawings a while ago. I actually got scared. XD So now I'm trying to figure out my own style, albeit I'm kind of slow at it.
I don't know if I am going to finish this, but maybe when I'm not too busy.

freakishlyesterday: None taken. (: And, thanks. It wasn't my intention to make them look creepy ((well, not too much)) but I suppose that it goes with the concept, now that i think about it.
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:44 am

Preposterous wrote:
Wolf-chan: Thank you. I'll consider those names. (: And, you're right about the nose, but I'm not a really big fan of manga/anime art any more, so I am trying to subtly deviate from the style. I started out with my drawings looking a lot like today's shoujo style ((large eyes, big forehead, almost invisible nose, pointy chin, etc.)) and was appalled when I looked through an old pile of my drawings a while ago. I actually got scared. XD So now I'm trying to figure out my own style, albeit I'm kind of slow at it.
I don't know if I am going to finish this, but maybe when I'm not too busy.


Lol Awesome.
Eck, I wish I could get my style down better, but I can't straw from Manga or else I'll start doing realism, and when I do that on the computer, you should cringe in horror and hide under a desk. Lol
I really like the style you currently have and I enjoy your art, none the less.
Lol That would be awesome. I'm still waiting on the reference, from my PM, so I'll let you know when that's done, M'kay? Sorry 'bout the wait. I know it must be a hassle.
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Clavicle » Fri Feb 25, 2011 9:04 am

It can be hard to merge realism with cartoony, so I really admire the artists who can do it effectively and successfully. Of course, I'm horrible, and a newbie, at realism... Or maybe at art in general. XD ((This drawing is like my, what, third/fourth attempt at drawing a human again in three years?)). I guess that we'll both just have to keep on drawing, and improving. (:

... Reference? Did I miss something here? Oh god, I am sorry, my brain is just.. Well, I wasn't lying when I said that it broke. My inbox has just been flooded with messages for a while now, so I had to erase most of them. And real life has been running me over, too. -can't get a break-
Erm, remind me, please? I feel so stupid...
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Fri Feb 25, 2011 9:15 am

Preposterous wrote:
It can be hard to merge realism with cartoony, so I really admire the artists who can do it effectively and successfully. Of course, I'm horrible, and a newbie, at realism... Or maybe at art in general. XD ((This drawing is like my, what, third/fourth attempt at drawing a human again in three years?)). I guess that we'll both just have to keep on drawing, and improving. (:

... Reference? Did I miss something here? Oh god, I am sorry, my brain is just.. Well, I wasn't lying when I said that it broke. My inbox has just been flooded with messages for a while now, so I had to erase most of them. And real life has been running me over, too. -can't get a break-
Erm, remind me, please? I feel so stupid...



It's a lot harder than you think when you don't have someone to pose for. Trust me. I tried drawing a human without someone to pose for me, and I ended p drawing a human that's half shifted into a wolf..... *blinks*

Lol it's alright. I emailed you, wondering if you would be willing to accept an art request from me. I had seen your artwork for your character Fruit and also wanted to compliment you on it. I love his design, colors, and how the fruit in his hair changes every time. It's cute. You said you would accept it, and I said I would send the reference tomorrow. I never did, because the reference hasn't been made yet. Lol Sorry 'bout that.
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Clavicle » Fri Feb 25, 2011 9:26 am

I usually get my sister to pose for me. She's really grumpy about it, though, especially for difficult poses like the twins'. oAo Badger someone from your family to help you out. XD ((Or sketch them secretly... >.>))

Yes, now I think I remember. Hm, wait, request or commission? O: I may have understood you wrong there.
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Fri Feb 25, 2011 9:36 am

Preposterous wrote:
I usually get my sister to pose for me. She's really grumpy about it, though, especially for difficult poses like the twins'. oAo Badger someone from your family to help you out. XD ((Or sketch them secretly... >.>))

Yes, now I think I remember. Hm, wait, request or commission? O: I may have understood you wrong there.


Heh yeah, but all of my siblings are males, and my parents are always busy. lol

Eh... Request... actually. I was going to pay with CS pets, seeing as money and computer's don't get along well with me.
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Clavicle » Fri Feb 25, 2011 9:46 am

Tweak that. The twins are male too ((although they don't look like they are... I like drawing girly guys. OTL)) My sis was just there to help me out with proportions/some anatomy, and to make sure that the poses I picked weren't impossible (: ((I actually sketch, and sometimes outline first and then fix later.)) I'd kill to have a brother, though. XD Live art reference! -hates drawing females-

Oh, that's alright then. I was a bit worried for a minute, since I thought that it was a request request, which I don't do. ((I call art for CS pets commissions too, if it clears up any confusion.))
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Re: Siamese((My brain just broke. WIP. Critique!))

Postby Shiko Hayashi » Fri Feb 25, 2011 10:15 am

Preposterous wrote:
Tweak that. The twins are male too ((although they don't look like they are... I like drawing girly guys. OTL)) My sis was just there to help me out with proportions/some anatomy, and to make sure that the poses I picked weren't impossible (: ((I actually sketch, and sometimes outline first and then fix later.)) I'd kill to have a brother, though. XD Live art reference! -hates drawing females-

Oh, that's alright then. I was a bit worried for a minute, since I thought that it was a request request, which I don't do. ((I call art for CS pets commissions too, if it clears up any confusion.))


Lol I have a habit of giving my characters long hair, giving them a slightly girly appearance. Lol my brother harps on me for that. My older, twin, and step brother are all right but they get on my nerves sometimes.

Lol that's fine. My fault as well.
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