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Postby alfred ★ » Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:25 am

title says it all XD
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Re: tear

Postby two.stride » Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:40 am

I don't think this belongs in intermediate, not because of "quality" but because it's a bit sparse and there's a lot of white space.
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Re: tear

Postby -Cazador- » Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:41 am

This is pretty good, but tr ading more detail to it :) Put in a back ground for it and maybe make the text a little fancy or something.
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Re: tear

Postby -Cazador- » Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:42 am

Palomino Sky wrote:I don't think this belongs in intermediate, not because of "quality" but because it's a bit sparse and there's a lot of white space.


And I agree with Palomino, it's not quite ready for Intermediate (:
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Re: tear

Postby purplepeopleseater » Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:44 am

i think sketches and experiments is were this belongs
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Re: tear

Postby alfred ★ » Mon Jan 24, 2011 12:04 pm

oops sorry this wasent supposed to be in intermediate i was viewing intermediate and i must have forgot sorry mods can you please move this to beginners ?
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Re: tear

Postby Cobrastyle » Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:12 pm

Yeah, even though it isn't intermediate I like how you did the shading.
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Re: tear

Postby Fiery Gatoh » Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:09 pm

Rather than just post about how I should move the picture already, it might help think to actually send me a message saying that there is a topic that needs to be moved. I am only human and not online 100% of the time.

I've moved it to sketches and experiments rather than beginner, since I think it's more suited to this board.
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Re: tear

Postby alfred ★ » Wed Jan 26, 2011 11:59 am

Fiery Gatoh wrote:Rather than just post about how I should move the picture already, it might help think to actually send me a message saying that there is a topic that needs to be moved. I am only human and not online 100% of the time.

I've moved it to sketches and experiments rather than beginner, since I think it's more suited to this board.

thank you Fiery Gatoh and im sorry but i cant send messages :?
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