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Flower On The Pond by Nickystar

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Flower On The Pond

Postby Nickystar » Wed Dec 01, 2010 2:58 pm

I was bored. First Oekaki :P Not first computer drawing lol. Drawn with mouse (I WANT I FREAKING TABLET >.<)

Comment if you want :)

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Re: Flower On The Pond

Postby minivan » Mon Dec 06, 2010 8:59 am

D:! Am I the only one who can't draw good with a freakin' mouse? -_-"

Other than that.. it looks awesome :D and I'm not saying that just because I'm your friend. I really like how you did the "star" in the middle all "glow-y". I also like how you did the water, but you might wanna try to soften the white a little, it looks like you're coming on too strong. Yet, it's awesome for a first :D

Edit: Maybe you should use light blue instead of white? :)
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Re: Flower On The Pond

Postby Sir Dingo » Mon Dec 06, 2010 9:04 am

Nice Nicky! I really like the flower<333

I also agree about the water, maybe you can blend and add ripples? That would look awesome!

Overall, It is very good for a first!
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Re: Flower On The Pond

Postby Nickystar » Mon Dec 06, 2010 7:12 pm

Ty ty. Okay, I think I shall try that :)

EDIT: What do you think of this?
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Re: Flower On The Pond

Postby Sir Dingo » Tue Dec 07, 2010 5:36 am

Much better!! :D
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Re: Flower On The Pond

Postby minivan » Sat Dec 11, 2010 12:45 am

Nickystar wrote:Ty ty. Okay, I think I shall try that :)

EDIT: What do you think of this?


Yup ^^ I agree with Okami on tis one, it's much better :D
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