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Moonblinked... by Mario

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Moonblinked...

Postby Mario » Fri Oct 08, 2010 3:58 am

An owlet from the movie The Guardians: The Owls of Gahoole who had gotten moonblinked. Please don't tell me if it's intermediate or not. The mods will move it if they want to or not. Only constructive criticism or comments please!
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Re: Moonblinked...

Postby starna » Fri Oct 08, 2010 4:24 am

sorry, not intermediate
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Re: Moonblinked...

Postby Corporal Levi » Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:47 am

kitten smoothie, they asked specifically not to say that. If you insist, please at least offer them tips.

Hmmm...I think, maybe you could work a little more on your blending and shading, and maybe study a bit on eye anatomy ^_^
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Re: Moonblinked...

Postby treekangaroo » Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:49 am

I think this needs more structure... Show the feathers a bit (using different tones, smudge) and do clear lines or just work with contrasts. You should also choose more natural colors for the whole owl. More like white, cream, darkbrown or a greyish brown. If you need inspiration for the colors, I drew an owl because of that movie myself. :D Just look at my gallery! :)
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