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Parctising legs by Stormie

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Parctising legs

Postby Stormie » Wed May 02, 2012 10:05 am

Yep back legs. Crit please! :)
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Re: Parctising legs

Postby horseandcat » Wed May 02, 2012 10:11 am

Try showing more dimension, right now the foot looks flat, and as if it were naturally in that angle as a side angle to the leg. Try adding more dimension, and that'll help loads. :)
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Re: Parctising legs

Postby Stormie » Wed May 02, 2012 10:13 am

Whats dimesion?
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Re: Parctising legs

Postby *Ghost* » Wed May 02, 2012 10:57 am

How do I put it... it's where it is shown from the side of the leg, the tows are side to side, kinda like this
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It's not the best drawing... but I hope it helps
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Re: Parctising legs

Postby horseandcat » Wed May 02, 2012 11:16 am

Like the difference between 2D and 3D for example. Right now, the paw and leg look very flat, as if they were squished together.
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Re: Parctising legs

Postby Stormie » Wed May 02, 2012 11:18 am

Would you like me to put your name in so you can red line it?
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Re: Parctising legs

Postby scourgeclaw » Wed May 02, 2012 11:58 am

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Re: Parctising legs

Postby horseandcat » Wed May 02, 2012 12:07 pm

I'm not the best at it, but I can show you how to fix it basically.
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Re: Parctising legs

Postby horseandcat » Mon May 07, 2012 3:06 pm

I made the redline. Feel free to use it!


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