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my first oekaki :) by leavingcs

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my first oekaki :)

Postby leavingcs » Thu Feb 11, 2010 8:59 pm

is it good? Is it not good? tell truth people!!! Pwease???
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Re: my first oekaki :)

Postby BlueCynder » Thu Feb 11, 2010 9:49 pm

oh wow, i think its great! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY better than my first oekaki. And i really mean WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY better.
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Evening walks among the orchard,

She greets the dancing dusk,

A spirit of the air;

A lady, if you must,

Her dress a robe of twilight,

Her eyes awash with sun.

She places gems of water,

Along the grass, among

The apples fallen, withered

By her master, Autumn Sire,

Coloured in the lilac glow

Of Winter’s sharp satire.
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