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Surreal Path by Yağmur

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Surreal Path

Postby Yağmur » Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:59 am

i thought it's time i should make another Intermediate drawing. Valentines day inspired me make this.<3
some constructive criticism would be appreciated
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Re: Surreal Path

Postby ponder; » Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:07 am

I like it :) It's very... dreamy...

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Re: Surreal Path

Postby Yağmur » Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:08 am

thanks
i was trying to make look surreal (dream-like) XD
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Re: Surreal Path

Postby ponder; » Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:11 am

Yağmur wrote:thanks
i was trying to make look surreal (dream-like) XD


Well it worked :D *clicks shiny star*

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Re: Surreal Path

Postby Zombex » Sat Feb 12, 2011 5:00 am

I love it!
So; Where the sky meets the ground in the purple-pink part, the dark should "Spill" over a bit into the pink sky, as to not make it a line :3

I love the dream thing you got going on! It's epic!
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Re: Surreal Path

Postby gomey » Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:13 am

Here are some things that you might like to consider.

If you ever visit Japan,you will learn that odd numbers are important. The same is true with Art. Don't have two trees, have three. Don't have two clouds, have three. If you want four animals, have five instead. There is something to be said about odd numbers. I was always told in Art to never use even number objects.

Also, I was always told that you should work for a flow that gives the eye a place to enter the work and then a flow that allows the eyes to exit.

Some artist think it is important to always include something red, even if it is just a touch.

Very nice picture. It is a lot like a dream.

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Re: Surreal Path

Postby EarthStar » Sat Feb 12, 2011 8:18 am

Very beautiful, I love the soft dreamy feel it brings and the lovely choice in colors. It already looks beautiful to me, but if you really want some constructive criticism/critique I think it would help to distinguish the border between the pond and the bank more.
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Re: Surreal Path

Postby ~Nonexistant » Sat Feb 12, 2011 9:18 am

Wow!! THAT IS SO PRETTY!!
I wish earth itself was like this -_-
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Re: Surreal Path

Postby Luke Skywalker » Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:46 am

gomey wrote:If you ever visit Japan,you will learn that odd numbers are important. The same is true with Art. Don't have two trees, have three. Don't have two clouds, have three. If you want four animals, have five instead. There is something to be said about odd numbers. I was always told in Art to never use even number objects.


Interesting. Never heard of it before {went to Japan a few times}, but I know that it's visually pleasing for me to see odd numbers of things vs. even numbers. Not quite sure why, sorry. :/

ANYWAY. This is beautiful. c: I love the gradient you used for the sky. The only thing that could have made this picture awesome was instead of making the lines blurry, to keep them thin and solid. Blurred lines usually imply poor quality unless it's in a black and white photograph. |D;;
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Re: Surreal Path

Postby Oofay » Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:53 am

This is incredible. The more I look, the more cool details I see! My favorite part is the sky: the sun on one side, the moon and stars on the other.
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