by BlueCynder » Sun Jul 11, 2010 5:29 am
I may edit it later...there is no particular reason for the title. I think it looks.....ok.
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Thank you so much all who said this was intermediate! I really appreciate your comments, and i would delete that unrelated post i made about the little signature dance thing but i cant find a delete button. Im really sorry about that, i didnt really know that wasn't allowed!
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BlueCynder on Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:52 am, edited 1 time in total.
Evening walks among the orchard,
She greets the dancing dusk,
A spirit of the air;
A lady, if you must,
Her dress a robe of twilight,
Her eyes awash with sun.
She places gems of water,
Along the grass, among
The apples fallen, withered
By her master, Autumn Sire,
Coloured in the lilac glow
Of Winter’s sharp satire.