[Starthorn]

Really pretty! <3 Love it! True art!

Thanks c: Everyone is being so nice about this!

[Hawkclaw100]

Feature! Feature!

[Starthorn]

Feature! Feature!

c: Heh. In my dreams!

[Starthorn]

Bump

[Zarago]

Star, would you like some critique?

[Starthorn]

Star, would you like some critique?

*begging* Yes please! Save the drawing, quickly!

[Zarago]

Alright, here goes. I think that you should add raining that's falling instead of fallen, as if it's still raining. Also, the tree closest to the right needs a better shadow, and the buildings in the background should be less 'fluffy' and have straighter lines. Maybe varying in shape also?

I've provided an image below that may give you some inspiration if you want to continue.

[Starthorn]

Hmm, okay. I like the idea of altering the buildings in the background. I am a bit boring when it comes to city scapes. Yes that reflection... bleh. How do you suggest that I make it look like it's still raining? I've tried a few things, but none really worked c:

[Zarago]

Try straight lines going down to the ground, and ripples on the pavement. Make sure you highlight some parts of the droplets, or they won't look wet enough.

[Starthorn]

I'll give it a try. *goes to give it a try*.