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Re: Red Umbrella

Postby Starthorn » Sat Apr 07, 2012 8:26 pm

PeachPassion wrote:
Really pretty! <3 Love it! True art! :D

Thanks c: Everyone is being so nice about this!
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Re: Red Umbrella

Postby Hawkclaw100 » Sat Apr 07, 2012 8:55 pm

Feature! Feature! :clap:
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Re: Red Umbrella

Postby Starthorn » Sat Apr 07, 2012 9:04 pm

Hawkclaw100 wrote:Feature! Feature! :clap:

c: Heh. In my dreams!
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Re: Red Umbrella

Postby Starthorn » Wed Apr 11, 2012 7:33 am

Bump
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Re: Red Umbrella

Postby Zarago » Wed Apr 11, 2012 8:53 am

Star, would you like some critique?
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Re: Red Umbrella

Postby Starthorn » Thu Apr 12, 2012 1:57 pm

Zarago wrote:
Star, would you like some critique?

*begging* Yes please! Save the drawing, quickly!
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Re: Red Umbrella

Postby Zarago » Fri Apr 13, 2012 4:52 am

Alright, here goes. I think that you should add raining that's falling instead of fallen, as if it's still raining. Also, the tree closest to the right needs a better shadow, and the buildings in the background should be less 'fluffy' and have straighter lines. Maybe varying in shape also?

I've provided an image below that may give you some inspiration if you want to continue.

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Re: Red Umbrella

Postby Starthorn » Fri Apr 13, 2012 6:20 am

Hmm, okay. I like the idea of altering the buildings in the background. I am a bit boring when it comes to city scapes. Yes that reflection... bleh. How do you suggest that I make it look like it's still raining? I've tried a few things, but none really worked c:
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Re: Red Umbrella

Postby Zarago » Fri Apr 13, 2012 6:23 am

Try straight lines going down to the ground, and ripples on the pavement. Make sure you highlight some parts of the droplets, or they won't look wet enough.

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Re: Red Umbrella

Postby Starthorn » Fri Apr 13, 2012 6:49 am

I'll give it a try. *goes to give it a try*.
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